please tell me what you think?

Question

I'm nothing but a brocken Heart
Tired of the world and its people all around
Tired of being pused around working hard
Wished everyone was just be gone
Tired of looking in the sky and wishing I could flly
Fly away from here
Fly away from my troubles and lige
Wish there was a world for people like me
where you dont have to act something your not.....

Answer 1

i think writting poems is a good way to keep your mind busy and at the same time to express your emotions when your feeling down and sad, keep writing you do it good...

Answer 2

I'm nothing but a broken Heart
Tired of the world and people all around
Tired of being pushed around and working too hard
Wish everyone would just disappear
Tired of looking towards the sky and wishing I could fly
Fly away from here
Fly away from my troubles and liege
Wish there was a world full of people like me
Where you don't have to act like someone you're not.....


But then again English was not my subject...

Answer 3

You have such a negative outlook on things, I wonder why.

I mean, it's a good poem, but depressing lol, it made me glad I don't look at things the same way. I'd have said:

My heart's been broken time and again
but I'm still here and my soul is fine
The more people push me,
The harder I work,
Makes me look into the sky and wish I could fly
And think how at this life's end I'll be able to ride a raindrop
and dance among the stars
And glad there's a place at the end of my race,
where you can be yourself

Answer 4

that's a good poem.

i'm sorry your so depressed... or at least it sounds like you are. hope you feel better soon :D

Answer 5

I think that is nice. Nice poem.

Answer 6

1st, is it supposed to rhyme?
and, well
why r u depressed