Does this cover letter a decent one? Please share your opinion as to errors in the text and the whole view?

Question

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am applying for the position of a credit analyst, which was advertised at the Credit KMB website. The position seems to fit well with my education, and career interests.
According to the KMB`s website, your position calls for good command of English, computer literacy, and a master degree in finance or economics. I will be graduating from Samara State University of Economics within the next few months with a master degree in economics. Apart from this, I enroll for the Chartered Financial Analyst program, which is called now as a «gold standard» for financial professionals.
My background and goals seem to match your requirements. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively, and I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic and well-known universal bank.
If you would like to schedule an interview or otherwise discuss my interest in this position, please call me at 11111111. I will be available at your convenience.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,

Answer 1

* 1st sentence: "at" should be "on"
* 3rd sentence: "master" should be "master's" (add apostrophe s)
* 4th sentence: "master" should be "master's" (add apostrophe s)
* 5th sentence: "Apart from this" would sound better if it was "In addition"
* 5th sentence: "enroll for" should be "completed" if you have completed the program in the past, or "have enrolled in" if you have not started the program, or "am attending" or "am participating in" if you are still doing it
* 5th sentence: "which is called now as a" sounds odd. How about changing it to "which is now considered a"
* 5th sentence: Be sure to use " and " (quotation marks) instead of << >>
* 8th sentence: "otherwise" makes it too wordy - just remove that

Otherwise, very good. I am very nitpicky. :)

Good Luck!

Answer 2

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am applying for the position of a credit analyst which was advertised at the Credit KMB website. The position seems to fit well with my education and career capabilities and interests.
According to the KMB`s website, your position calls for a good command of English, computer literacy, and a Masters degree in finance or economics. I will be graduating from Samara State University of Economics within the next few months with a Masters degree in Economics. In addition to this, I have enrolled in the Chartered Financial Analyst program, which is known as a premium standard for financial professionals.
My background and goals seem to match your requirements. I am confident that I can perform the job effectively, and I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic and well-known universal bank.
If you would like to schedule an interview or otherwise discuss my interest in this position, please call me at 11111111. I will be available at your convenience.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,

Answer 3

Your cover letter is good and effective. I did a little proof reading and here is the result ---it is changed just a little.


I am applying for the position of a credit analyst which was advertised at the Credit KMB website. The position fits well with my education and career interests.
According to the KMB`s website, your position calls for a good command of English, computer literacy, and a Masters degree in finance or economics. I will be graduating from Samara State University of Economics within the next few months with a Masters degree in economics. Apart from this, I am enrolled in the Chartered Financial Analyst program, a program recognized as the "gold standard" for financial professionals. My background and goals match your requirements for the position being offered and I am confident that I can perform the job effectively. I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic and well-known universal bank and I have enclosed my resume for your review.

I am looking forward to meeting with you to discuss a position with your company and am available to interview at your earliest convenience. I can be contacted at the following number________.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

Answer 4

I have taken the liberty of editing your letter: (good luck with the position!)

Dear Mr. Smith,

Please accept my resume for the position of a credit analyst, advertised at the Credit KMB website on (DATE). The position fits well with my education, and future career interests.
According to KMB`s website, this position calls for good command of English, computer literacy, and a master degree in finance or economics. I will be graduating from Samara State University of Economics within the next few months with a masters degree in economics. In addition, I am enrolled (ing) in the Chartered Financial Analyst program. ( No need to identify what this program is)

I am confident that I can demonstrate my ability to perform the job effectively and I will exceed expectations. I am truly excited about the prospect of working for a dynamic and well-known universal bank.
If you would like to schedule an interview or otherwise discuss my interest in this position, please call me at 11111111. I will be available at your convenience.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,

Answer 5

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Answer 6

I would add a few sentences on my background and goals, and how they will match the requirements. You seem to be a student with out experience. If that is correct you may have to tell clearly on this point. Always better to inform your limitations along with your capabilities. Be honest. Honesty pays in the long run. Best of Luck.