What do you think of this poem?

Question

cold blood
your lies have caused my sould to bleed
people ask why i ever cried over you
i couldnt procede
evedently my life was not ment for 2
and to believe
i waited for you
for 4 long years
we exchanged letters and phone calls
well now u can realize your fears
and notice that u dont have the balls
the balls to realize ive shed my last tears
im done crying over you your not worth it
you can just sit, and sit, and sit....
until your lies cause your soul to bleed
until it bleeds the same cold blood mine bleed
the cold blood it bleed for 4 years
my soul is stained from blood and tears
i had given up so much for you
& then you f*ck only god knows who
ive come to realie everything youve ever done or said
is a bunch of B.S........ B.S. that that caused the tears i shed
and the ever so cold blood i bleed

Answer 1

Good

Answer 2

Not to be mean or anything, but it would be a lot better if you didn't use netspeak in it.
It would be a good poem, but using '2' and 'u' are detracting from it. Otherwise, nice job!

Answer 3

10 outa 10 realy emotional

Answer 4

I think it was really good, way to put your feelings out there. You should be proud of it, and even more proud that you shared it with everyone

Answer 5

I really like it. I feel your anger on that poem. On the flipside, it's sad that someone caused you that much pain and anger and put you through so much.

Answer 6

Wow. Send it to him for sure. Very emotional. Men eh.

Answer 7

Thats pretty good

Answer 8

wow. very emotion filled. its good. i don't read Poetry very often but i think its good.

Answer 9

quite good

Answer 10

its ok