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Pleas help me my English is poor and its third time that I ask this question to get help pleas try to help me just how to start how to write an essay and then I can try to write.

i have red an article and it was about the new technology. if new technology can find IQ gene to make children smarter. its says : If you could make your kids smarter, would you? If everyone else did, would it be fair not to?
I have to write an essay with a title: "If you could make your kids smarter, would you? If everyone else did, would it be fair not to"?

i have to answer these questions and comment it in the essay. Pleas don’t copy from internet

it also says: A Source of inspiration
1.correcting versus perfecting?
2. A Better school versus a better gene?
3. Natural evolution versus genetic engineering?
4. Diversity versus uniformity?
Pleas give me some comment with details. So I can better understand what you mean.
pleas help me by writting some lines so i can start to write my essay

2007-01-24 08:54:12 · 2 answers · asked by nice_ girl 1 in News & Events Media & Journalism

2 answers

I haven't read the article, so I don't know the facts. Also, I don't know how long your essay is supposed to be, but here are some tips-
In the first paragraph, summarize the points that you intend to make in your essay- Example-
Scientists are developing controversial technology that could allow potential parents to "engineer" their child's IQ. While some parents might jump at the chance to give their child an advantage over other children, other people are opposed to genetic modification, unless it is to correct a known genetic weakness.
---In the body of your essay answer the questions, or show both opposing viewpoints, with supporting statements --
Your concluding paragraph should review what you said in the essay. Don't just recopy the first paragraph. If your instructor wants to know your opinion on the subject, then give it, and add one or two sentences supporting your point of view.
---I think that genetic IQ engineering will be a useful technology to parents, and that it will help people worldwide. The children born out of this technology will be able to make progress in all fields of science, including medicine, space travel, blah blah blah.---
I hope this helps!

2007-01-24 09:51:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

There are a couple good answers before mine, and i was also thinking you could close your essay with, something like in conclusion to my essay i conducted a random survey of people that I communicate with on Yahoo Questions an answers, and have actual data to support my paper. It appears that _____People out of _____ said that they would or wouldn't do, depending on what results your search renders. Re-type your question and word it like this-If you could make your kids smarter, would you, and if everyone else did, would it be fair not to?-print those pages off, not the answers from this question and use those as supporting documents for your paper-it's sure to score an better grade, it will appear as though you actually researched you subject and took time to find out the answer from real people. Don't forget to footnote any sources used.

2016-05-24 05:16:17 · answer #2 · answered by Susan 4 · 0 0

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