my three main idea is:mentally fit ,physically fit and internal benefits.please help me right this essay if u dont like my ideas use three of urs to write on for a three body paragraph.
2007-01-23 15:37:55 · 4 answers · asked by miss p 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Why can't you do your own homework? Not smart enough?
2007-01-23 15:41:05 · answer #1 · answered by Ti 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
hmmm... I say the best way to start an essay is start with a thesis.
Your whole essay is based on your thesis!
Your thesis is your opinon and your essay is the proof to back it up. You can write the essay before the thesis but it's difficult. It's like walking around blindfolded - you have no direction.
I think that the three body paragraph ideas you have are a great start, although physically fit and internal benefits go hand in hand so I think that would be a little difficult to write two different paragraphs on two things that are the same
Instead I would focus more I just the two ideas of having physically fit and mentally fit.
A lot of students are under the impression that you must have three body paragraphs in an essay. No! Hell you could have fourteen body paragraphs, or you could have two. one body paragraph is pushing it, but two body paragraphs is totally fine.
Using two body paragraphs instead of three will give you a lot more freedom to expand on the topic, and you can then include in your physically fit body paragraph, the internal benefits. You may also wants to talk about the emotional wellness of working out in your mentally fit paragraph, the rush of endorphins you get, things like that. Do you see what I mean? Writing with two basic paragraphs gives you lots of room for expansion into other ideas.
Ok thesis, you didn't mention which way you were leaning towards in the essay, whether it's important or not, I'm going to assume important since it's the eaiser of the two.
I might bring up the idea of
"In today's society the importance of a regular fitness routine is becoming more relavant then ever before, and the mental and physical benefits prove that."
You can choose to use that, personally I wouldn't because I'd rather you make your own, think of mine as a template.
I think I gave you enough information, hopefully it helps.
Good luck, remember essays are your opinon, so have some fun with them.
2007-01-23 16:33:36 · answer #2 · answered by Kipper to the CUP! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The easiest way to write an essay is follow this simple plan. Tell em what your gonna tell em, tell em, then tell em what you told em. Start your first paragraph by listing the topics of your essay. Then the next 3 paragraphs should cover one by one the topics you have listed. Your closing paragraph is just recap paragraph. I cannot tell you what to write in your essay because that would be cheating but that is the proper format.
2007-01-23 15:47:07 · answer #3 · answered by freakyallweeky 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Dude, I'm not going to write you an essay. Get up off your lazy butt and do it yourself.
2007-01-23 15:44:29 · answer #4 · answered by ♥Catherine♥ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋