My poem:
Grub said the dangle
Hedge Bush Burn fire
sloth and avarice
Mince beef, oven, Pot pan
like like likely
Dust Dates Damnation
Hot Hot Cold lies laid down
2007-01-23 11:25:39
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answer #1
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answered by Anonymous
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Is this for a school project or what?
I am a writer and I suggest you go outside and look at something in nature- a tree. and elaborate on this....
how the leaves fall to the ground and seasons change... just as life is.... baby to old age.
Now write about something metaphorically. The leaves and seasons are here, compared to life. When writing a poem the topic should be something you have a passion about... and i am sure there are many things, if you think about that you could turn into a beautiful poem. Start small and then later get bigger. Write bits and pieces then try to put them together on the same subject.
2007-01-23 19:23:44
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answered by lindasue m 3
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Matt
I have this problem
Or rather several
I have loved and lost
Simultaneously the saddest and most beautiful experience
So painful yet impossible to regret.
The thing you take away from this kind of experience is how to never relive it.
Matt
Astronaut, I wanna go with you on your space travels
As our fingers intertwine, the ship blasts off, two passengers inside
The inertia increases, a force so great that strange and interesting events unfold.
First, the atoms disentangle. These are soul atoms, so they have different chemistry than the physical atoms of our bodies.
However they are linked to our bodily atoms, so that physical acceleration of motion causes a parallel reaction in our souls.
The rotor spins, smearing the atoms along the wall.
Descending, the atoms have combined to form one.
We lay as such for a few moments
Or maybe several, knowing another soul as well as yourself,
Loving him as he loves you, and thus you love yourself, because he is you.
So grateful that you found another as beautiful as you.
Nothing I ever write will be beautiful enough to do you justice my wonderful spaceman.
2014-07-29 18:34:48
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answered by Reba B 2
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air burned orange
around
the blue heart
as your image melted from the cup
and ran down the distance
into a pool
which formed a circle
where the candle stood
A free verse poem creates an image without rhyme and meter.
2007-01-23 19:45:17
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answer #4
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answered by GARY M 2
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I would show you one of my poems
If I knew you wouldnt cheat me
But you probably would
Cuz its the internet you see?
Theres no way to know,
That you only read it a time or two
Cuz I might see it in a book
And it says written by you.
Now that wouldnt be good,
Cuz you'd get credit,and I would get none.
And me posting my poem
Would be the worst thing I've couldve done.
So girl write your own.
And quit depending on me.
You wont get a poem,
Just watch and you'll see.
By:ME!
2007-01-23 19:37:53
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answered by Anonymous
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I have a poem a wrote a couple years ago got to poems . com look up frank rhoades it should still be there if not there are many more for ideas only alot of them are copy writed so no copying please!
2007-01-23 19:28:35
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answered by frank r 1
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Working, breathing
Sweating, steaming hot
It seems to me that answering questions
on Yahoo!Answers is
something that takes work,
something that takes skill,
something that takes strength
of mind and the drive to reply even
when the odds are high and
two points are all you get.
2007-01-23 19:24:25
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answer #7
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answered by treseuropean 6
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roses are red
violets are purple
i bet your lips taste
like maple syrupal
2007-01-23 19:25:43
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answered by Anonymous
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If I gave you one of mine odds are you would just copy it so NOOOOOOO!!!!
2007-01-23 19:23:46
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answered by mungbeansalad_luvers 1
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