Need a Poet's help...?

Question

I need a 12 line poem comparing life to an activity. From a person's point of view.

I'll give 10 points if u tell me how to give points too hehe. thanks.

20 or 30 points or more! depending on how good the poem is (for high school junoir level).

Answer 1

I'm not going to your homework. Yet you can compared life to an activity's by something you enjoy doing or compared the people around and what they do. Here example I did. I don't mind if you use it.

The wind rushing threw my hair.
It flow as it sweep between my gentle hand.
I felt it calm my emotion,
the wind guiding me.

Windy as I sit in the sand,
watching the ocean.
Hearing it emotion and word.
Feeling the wind and ocean soul,

My eye watch the ocean,
sliding back and forth.
The wind relax me
and the ocean make me smile.

Answer 2

does it have to rhyme?

I'll make 2-one that rhymes and one that doesn't

#1

My name is brad
My favorite activity is fishing
especially with my dad

But it made me think
how life is like fishing
as i watched the bait sink

You have to wait for that perfect opportunity
then pull with all your might
with incredible velocity

as long as you never give up
you'll always catch that fish
unless you do, in fact, give up

# 2

I swung the baseball bat
as hard as I could
I only wish i had done that
in reality

Sprinting to home plate
reminded me of how i used to
try my hardest
in everything i did

hearing the call of the offcial
made me recall
that there's always hope
Even though it may not seem that way

If it didn't matter then just choose whatever one you want

Hope this helps

Answer 3

as i run across the yard
looking near and looking far
i see you standing breathing hard

i wave my hand in the air
hoping that you can see me through your hair
but you stand still without a care

i run to you and you run to me
we go and sit by the tree
looking down at my knee