i have a dream that this nation will stop w/ the steriotype.
I have a dream that ppl will not see white ppl as racist, or the asians as smart ppl, or see the black ppl as gangsters. i have a dream that ppl will realize that just because of someone's race does not make them like everybodyelse in that one race.
i have a dream that ppl will come to their senses and notice that they can be prejudice, and change their ways. i have a dream today.
i have a dream that ppl will stop being pressured from being expected to be something they are not, depending on race/ethnic.
i have a dream today
i have a drea mtoday that ppl will be less self-centered, ignorant, and conceited.
This is my hope. this is the faith w/ which will make people less pressured.
I have a dream.
-if something doesn't make sense.
type the line in quotes and reword it so that it makes sense. plz and thank you.
2007-01-23 10:52:59 · 6 answers · asked by Neline 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
-this is a remake of the martin luther king speech .
-this is for a speech class
2007-01-23 11:08:24 · update #1
Good job!!! I have a few recommendations for rewording things...
-you have misspelled stereotype in the first line.
"i have a dream that ppl will realize that just because of someone's race does not make them like everybodyelse in that one race. "
- I have a dream that ppl will realize that just because someone is a particular race does not mean they are like everyone else in that race.
"i have a dream that ppl will stop being pressured from being expected to be something they are not, depending on race/ethnic."
-i have a dream that ppl will stop being pressured by others' expectations to be something they are not, depending on race/ethnicity.
Bravo! You did excellent!
2007-01-23 11:09:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I Have a dream....
I have a dream of a nation with out sterotyping...
I have a dream that people will not see white people, as the cause of racism, or Asians, just the smartest, or the Blacks, as gangsters, etc ..I have this dream that people will finall realize that because of someone's race, they are not judged as a whole against a nation..
I have a dream, that people will be accepted for who they are, and not who they are not...I dream of a day without prejudice, with people coming to their senses and being kind to each other..
I have a dream that today people will be less self centered, ignorant, and concieted...
This is my hope, my dreams and the faith which will make people live without pressure and stress inflicted by each other...
I have a dream..
2007-01-23 19:06:35 · answer #2 · answered by MotherKittyKat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neline,
Your poem is very original. While Dr. King's "I Have a Dream" speech is no doubt exceptional, your poem "breaks it down" so that the youth of today can totally relate to it. I like it. You sound like an intelligent young lady who is headed in the right direction. Stay positive and strong. My best to you!
Peace
2007-01-23 19:05:31 · answer #3 · answered by JOURNEY 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Makes sense but tell me how many people are living in fear.Fear is what keeps us binded.There is only one who can free us of that fear and that is our Lord. Love everyone is the message in the speech.Love is what comes when you destroy fear.
2007-01-23 19:02:02 · answer #4 · answered by lightangellion 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, the text speak takes a little decoding.....
2007-01-23 19:00:27 · answer #5 · answered by Tony W 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's a really good, sosoooooooo true i have all those dreams also...perfect!!
2007-01-23 19:02:15 · answer #6 · answered by C/0 '09_R.I.P kING MJ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋