MEMENTO DOUBLE EGO
My mind keeps asking, pondering,
Wondering how it felt to witness pale
In cheeks and blue in lips; my soul
Quivers in grief and sorrow for he
Who innocent was of such discovery:
An inert prey of helpless despair,
One who endeavoured to blind life's fair
And thus with calm of own create new pain.
Poor Creator! The Eye of such deed!
To cause him such deep hurt, no need;
The earthly perpetrator of self doom
Has left a hopeless sigh on father gloom.
Though he bask in his ever-weeping tomb,
His souls and heir amongst us oft will loom.
AJ
2007-01-23 10:32:49 · 5 answers · asked by malejisa 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
hey! iam from france, and i didn't understand everything. that is to say, that i focused on the sounds, the rythm of the sentences, the fluency, the words as continuation of letters... and that makes your sonnet sounds beauteous. it's just lovely!!
2007-01-24 06:21:36 · answer #1 · answered by La carotte sacrée 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very hard to see,
If there were no gloom
Where would happiness be.
Wonderful sonnet. I liked the theme and the structure, even though I don't completly agree with it. keep up the good work!
2007-01-23 19:43:30 · answer #2 · answered by Gilbert 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!! I love it! You have some real talent!
2007-01-23 18:41:01 · answer #3 · answered by Ldy Bug 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
SO cool that you actually wrote a SONNET!!!!
2007-01-23 18:41:13 · answer #4 · answered by wonderer152 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
do you really really believe thus?
2007-01-23 18:40:36 · answer #5 · answered by Gloryana 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋