Ok, it's called Fouron Intelligence. This girl and boy, Galxy and Ash have been trained from the time they were little in fouron intelligence, the most secretive branch of the foroun military. So they grow up in the toughest inviroment. There training if Awful. They get beat everyday and tourcherd unimanginably. All of this is to get the "tougher". Anyway, they have to tourtcher American solders and kill them after getting information from them. They are the highest ranking officers and the toughest. It takes a lot to kill them, they can get shot and still walk away because of the training they've had. they finally get tired of it. They escape to America, but with the next ranking officers on their tail. Now they have to find out how to warn the US about the huge bomb that could blow up the the eniter United States. So, what do you think.
2007-01-23 09:51:42 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
well, that is definately some us stuff. it's like a mix of 24hours chrono and JAG. but whatever... some ppl do like it. i'd add something to your characters. like: they are questionning themselves on the real sense of a life full of violence and death: is it the only exit? for whom are we doing that? not revealing the bomb woudn't it be like a revenge for all what we endured? and this could put in danger (or not) the mission... good luck anyway!!
2007-01-24 06:34:04 · answer #1 · answered by La carotte sacrée 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds intresting to me. I would definetly read it. I'm a writer too! I've been working on a story for two years and i'm working on the last chapter. If only i could get out of writer's block. Hope you get published if that's what you want!
2007-01-23 18:00:21 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋