What do you think of my bands lyrics?

Question

The song is Through the Monsoon. My bands name is Tokio Hotel.

I'm staring at a broken door
Theres nothing left here anymore
My room is cold, it's making me insane
I've been waiting here so long
Another moment seems to've come
I see the dark clouds coming up again

Running through the monsoon
Beyond the world
Til the end of time
Where the rain wont hurt
Fighting the storm
Into the blue
And when I loose myself I think of you
Together we'll be running somewhere new
Through the monsoon
Just me and you

A halfmoon fading from my sight
I see your vision in its light
But now it's gone and left me so alone
I know I have to find you now
Can hear you name and don't know how
Why can't we make this darkness feel like home?

Running through the monsoon
Beyond the world
Til the end of time
Where the rain wont hurt
Fighting the storm
Into the blue
And when I loose myself I think of you
Together we'll be running somewhere new
And nothing can hold me back from you
Through the monsoon
Hey!
Hey!

I'm fighting all these powers coming in my way
Let it take me straight into you I've been running night and day
I'll be with you soon
Just me and you
We'll be there soon
So soon

Running through the monsoon
Beyond the world
Til the end of time
Where the rain wont hurt
Fighting the storm
Into the blue
And when I loose myself I think of you
Together we'll be running somewhere new
And nothing can hold me back from you
Through the monsoon
Through the monsoon
Just me and you
Through the monsoon
Just me and you

Answer 1

i really like it! of course i've made up the music in my head to go along with it : ) it has great structure and real balance. way to go! i'll be keepin' one ear on the radio waitin' to hear this one live!

Answer 2

umm...whoa! YOUR band? what do you mean? unless YOU ARE Bill, Tom, Georg, or Gustav, then its not your band.
anyway.....the song is great. i love it. =)

Answer 3

Its great! Very good! Good luck.