I am calling on "Astronomers" for the honest critic of only one quatrain of my numerous verses ? (see below)

Question

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A phosphorescent limelight looms on land where the green crabgrass grows/
The stormy weather eery sheen glares on verdant grazing meadows/
Between two horns of Taurus creeps the green Crab Nebula's which shows/
Where the young greehorn was reborn onto the lush grassland of cows/
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Answer 1

"A phosphorescent limelight looms on land where the green crabgrass grows/"

Limelight is not phosphorescent. It is a very bright light used in stage spotlights. It doesn't "loom" either. You should try another image.

"The stormy weather eery sheen glares on verdant grazing meadows/

I presume you mean the stormy weather's sheen, in which case you need an apostrophe to show possession. Also "eerie" is spelt thus. Sheens don't "glare", another poor image.

"Between two horns of Taurus creeps the green Crab Nebula's which shows/"

The green Crab Nebula's what? You have a hanging possessive there.

"Where the young greehorn was reborn onto the lush grassland of cows/"

Greenhorn, I think.

You have overdone the greenery somewhat. Overall, it needs some work.

Answer 2

I wouldn't say that the Crab Nebula creeps, as it doesn't really move at all (not any more than any other star, that is). I would say "looms" but you already used that word.

Answer 3

Highly pretentious rubbish.

Sorry, that is my honest opinion.