AT half-past three a single bird
Unto a silent sky
Propounded but a single term
Of cautious melody.
At half-past four, experiment
Had subjugated test,
And lo! her silver principle
Supplanted all the rest.
At half-past seven, element
Nor implement was seen,
And place was where the presence was,
Circumference between.
2007-01-22 23:29:04 · 12 answers · asked by The Devils Bowls 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
It is Emily Dickonson you morons, who have tons of books and has been acclaimed as one of the greates women poets of the centruary. I see how for your brain cells flow and it isn't that far. But maybe when you come down and visit me I can do something to help it out.
2007-01-22 23:37:27 · update #1
3 very poor
2007-01-22 23:31:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you may have your heart's want and also a 10 if it particularly is the better which i glean from the information that it really is what that is, then right here you're 10 back.... keep reading your poems till you get to those that talk about domes or in case you may't locate that type then write it your self -- and understand you're probably touching on to a gnome in that you've a kind of a lengthy time period at artwork and each and each wears a hat it really is a touch distinct from the different one, yet take care my pricey lest you change into lost interior the land of overthink keep writing do not decide or edit purely be open to the flow that pours by ability of you the more suitable you're attempting this the easier it is going to change into..... (no such note as easier, yet there that is) persist with yer readin n writing... no count number what else takes position on your lifetime..... thanks for the Q :)
2016-10-15 23:43:11 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the first stanza very much, the second is not as easy to comprehend what you are getting at, and nothing happens in the third. 8/10
2007-01-22 23:35:17 · answer #3 · answered by Timothy C 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
about 6. it was alrite. you need to expand your mind. when you write poetry let the pen do all the work. Take mind altering substancesd. Smoke pot and drink ..ive made some great poems all fu cked up!!
2007-01-22 23:38:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are a pompous a##! Not everyone is an idiot. Do you even know what the poet means? I bet not.
2007-01-22 23:41:28 · answer #5 · answered by Shell 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm trying to find a poem, when are you going to post one.
2007-01-22 23:35:34 · answer #6 · answered by Golly Geewiz 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good try practice makes perfect dont give up 4
2007-01-22 23:35:28 · answer #7 · answered by friendcac 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5 okay
2007-01-22 23:32:57 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
4. Its hard to read, it makes your brain stop and start not cool.
2007-01-22 23:33:55 · answer #9 · answered by pixelchix 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if one is the lowest then I would give you a minus 12......keep your day job
2007-01-22 23:33:04 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋