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Question

Please make sure that the following sentence ok without grammatical fault .
This is my single web page. I am male 24 and from Bangladesh. It’s a small country it besides India. Basically I am a software engineer. Now I am doing work in a software farm (part time). I have also my agro based business. In every month I have to outside of out capital to visit my farm .And the most interesting thing is out country is too beautiful. It’s a green country.
You can believe if you not come here. We have 6 seasons in our country.
I feel a inner pressure to share the beauty and wonderful sights of my country with every one , off course with the people who live abroad of Bangladesh. I am not rich. But I have the ability to make you well explore in my country (only that part which is known to me). So, feel free to contact with me , mail me . please, don’t hesitate if you heave any advice in this regard.

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Answer 1

As diddlibop said, but with a couple of changes to get rid of another couple of errors and also to say it as we would say it ourselves. (Oh, and good luck!)

This is my only website. I am a 24 year-old male from Bangladesh, which is a small country that sits beside India. I am a software engineer, currently working part-time in a software farm and I also have an agricultural business. Every month I leave the capital to visit my farm and the most interesting thing is the countryside, which is so green and beautiful.

You won't believe me unless you come here. We have six seasons in our country. I feel an inner pressure to share the beauty and wonderful sights of my country with everyone and especially with the people who live outside Bangladesh. I am not rich, but I have the ability to help you explore my country (those parts that I know). If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me by mail.

Answer 2

This is my only website. I am a 24 year old male from Bangladesh, a small country that sits beside India. Basically I am a software engineer. I am currently working part time in a software farm and I also have my agro based business. Every month I leave the capital to visit my farm. And the most interesting thing is the countryside is so beautiful, it's so green.
You won't believe me unless you come here. We have 6 seasons in our country. I feel an inner pressure to share the beauty and wonderful sights of my country with everyone, of course with the people who live outside of Bangladesh. I am not rich, but I have the ability to help you explore my country (that parts which I know of). So, feel free to contact me by mail. Please, do no hesitate if you have any questions

Answer 3

Hello!

Thanks for dropping by my web page. I am male 24 from Bangladesh. It’s a small country it besides India.

I am a software engineer by training and presently doing a part-time work in a software development farm. Besides this job, I am running my own agro-based business. I have to travel outside the capital city Dhaka every month to inspect my farm.

It is the most interesting thing to experience the natural beauty of countryside, which is eye soothing green and almost every direction one looks around, would see the beauty of nature, which you can only believe when you would come here and see for yourself.

You may be aware that we have 6 seasons in our country. I feel an inner pressure to share the beauty and wonderful sights of my country with every one of you. I am not rich but I have the ability to guide you explore in my country to see interesting places.

Please do not hesitate to ask me questions or seek advice in this respect, if needed, by e-mail or any communication mode suitable to you.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes from Bangladesh.


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