You might want to rephrase the sentence. Instead of " was doing so badly," you might say "when I did poorly in school"
And try to avoid using the verb "to be" in front of another verb. Instead of "he was running," write "he ran." and change "she is talking" to "she talks" It makes writing sound much more professional^^
2007-01-22 14:33:17
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answered by Kangarooo 2
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Hmm, honest adequate. although, i'm going to nevertheless insist on calling it "chivalry" whilst my husband is going out in a snow fall for ice cream and pickles whilst i'm pregnant. he's my knight, what am i able to declare. i'm into courtesy, yet what approximately courtesies that are prolonged because of the fact of gender? whilst a guy bargains with a mouse or a malicious program it is gotten into the room, and the female stands around screaming, is he purely being courteous? Why could the reproductive-evolution-based choose for a guy to teach that he will take care of his woman be "ineffective"? Are women folk going to end wearing lipstick, too?
2016-11-01 01:22:10
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answer #2
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answered by ? 4
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I remember when I wasn't doing my best in school...
I remember when I was failing in school...
I remember when I was just barely getting by in school...
2007-01-22 14:32:33
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answer #3
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answered by Donna L 3
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"i remember when i was doing poorly in school"
"i remember doing poorly in school"
"i remember I used to struggle in school"
"i remember when i struggled in school"
" i remember when i did below average in school"
"i remember when i had bad grades in school"
hope some of these helped
2007-01-22 14:38:36
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answer #4
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answered by trm224@sbcglobal.net 1
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...I remember when I was doing poorly in school...
...I remember when I wasn't doing well in school..
...I remember when my grades were poor...
...I remember when my grades were bad...
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I'm sure all of you are wonderful people, but please don't become English teachers....
"just barely getting by," while not inherently wrong, would be considered poor form in formal writing...
"when i was doing not very well in school" has a dangling modifier... instead use "...when I was not doing very well in school..."
2007-01-22 14:32:53
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answer #5
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answered by Tiff 5
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When my school grades were the worst in my class...
When I demonstrated no knowledge of the school subjects..
When my grades almost kept me from getting promoted...
2007-01-22 14:36:45
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answer #6
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answered by Rich Z 7
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I remember when i wasn't working to my full potential....
i remember when my performance was not the best....
i remember when my work was leaving much to be desired...
2007-01-22 14:37:07
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answer #7
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answered by Scotty M 2
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"I remember when I was not doing well in school"
2007-01-22 14:33:27
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answer #8
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answered by jojo 2
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use horribly...or a synanym to badly
2007-01-22 14:31:36
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answer #9
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answered by Anonymous
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Poorly or less than average,
2007-01-22 14:32:03
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answer #10
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answered by whrldpz 7
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