the sentence is, " you are like drugs. you controlled my mind, body and soul. I can't get away from you cause you're so addictive"..
I felt that this sentence is something wrong..Can you add in some words for me or just correct my sentence.
Thank you.
2007-01-21 21:25:43 · 21 answers · asked by Cassie 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Thanks Natalie ((:
2007-01-21 21:30:32 · update #1
You are so addictive like a drug.You have controlled my mind,body & soul & that's why am not able to get rid off u...My love!!
2007-01-21 21:30:12 · answer #1 · answered by ColD fIRe! 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are like drugs: you control (why past tense? if you feel this strongly about someone it's a continuous thing) my mind, body and soul. I can't (so many choices... I can't get away from you BEcause/cos... but maybe you want to say "I'll never quit because I'm hooked" or "you're the one drug I can't quit" or "If you're the drug then I'm the addict, and frankly I'm not sure I want to be cured" In terms of advice I'd say figure out how you feel, and then put it in terms of the "you are a drug" metaphor, and don't mix your metaphors up... stick with "you are a drug" and put everything else in those terms)
Good luck with the person you're addicted to...
Remember that the other person isn't actually a drug, or a toy, respect each other, wear a condom, all the advice your mother gave you when you left the house....
2007-01-21 21:41:39 · answer #2 · answered by splat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are like drugs. You are so addictive that I can't get away from you. You have controlled my body, soul, and mind.
2007-01-21 21:31:53 · answer #3 · answered by greatnewsbearer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
" You're so addictive, you are like drugs you controll my body mind & soul. I can't get away from you"
I don't know your way seems good although dont let him controll you like that really lol
2007-01-21 21:39:59 · answer #4 · answered by ausblue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
maybe you should re word it as
You are like a drug. You control my mind, body and soul. I cant seem to get away from you because you are so addictive.
Maybe only the tense needs a bit of working on.
2007-01-21 21:35:43 · answer #5 · answered by brian p 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are like drugs. you control my mind, body and soul. I can't get away from you cause you're so addictive
2007-01-21 21:33:13 · answer #6 · answered by Layla 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm addicted to you like some drug that's controlling my mind, body and soul. There's no escaping you!
2007-01-21 21:36:07 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"You are like drugs. You control my mind, body, and soul. I can't get away from you because you're so addictive"
There you go - perfect english
2007-01-21 21:28:36 · answer #8 · answered by jsprplc2006 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I'll give it a go! "You are like a drug. You've controled my mind body and soul. I can't get away get away because you are addictive" That last scentence is still akward.. if I might be so bold - "And you're as adictive as I am dependent." or simply "I'm addicted to you"
2007-01-21 21:31:29 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are like a drug; you control my mind body and soul. I can’t get away from you because you are so addictive.
2007-01-21 21:29:49 · answer #10 · answered by ftumpsh 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋