Please correct the grammar and format for me......?

Question

Respected Sir,

Most respectfully, I am requesting you to grant me an opportunity to change my subject (management Indian) to (managementglobal.)

with respectifully,
sina.

Answer 1

Respected Sir,

I kindly request you allow me an opportunity to change my subject from Indian Management to Global Management.

Sincerely Yours,
Sina

Answer 2

Respected Sir,

With all due respect, I am requesting that you grant me an opportunity to change my subject from Management Indian to Management Global.

Sincerely,
Sina

Answer 3

Dear Sir:

I respectfully request the opportunity to change my subject from Management Indian to Management Global.

Thank you very much,
Sina

Answer 4

Here is an option:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I respectfully request permission to change my subject from Indian Management to Global Management.

Most sincerely,



Sina

Answer 5

Dear Sir,

I am requesting you to grant me the opportunity to change my major from Indian Management to Global Management.

Respectfully,

Sina

Answer 6

Respected Sir,
Hereby I'm requesting you to provide me an opportunity to change my subject from Management Indian to Management Global.
Thank you

Yours obediently,
Sina.

Answer 7

Dear Sir,

I wish to respectfully request a changing of my subject from Indian management to that of global management.

Thank you.

Sincerely,
Sina.

Answer 8

Advice and Tips:

"Top left corner should be your name and address"

(leave a space)

" On your right should be the date"

(leave a space and start your letter below)

*Their/his or her address/company name, same format as your address but on the left this time"

(leave a space)

(Dear, "It should be his or her name"),

Most respectfully, (you don't say that in a letter)

I am requesting you to grant me (your ordering someone to do something, it's not a good thing)

an opportunity to change my subject (management Indian) to (management global.)

with respectifully, (don't use this closing)
sina.

Here:

Sina (your last name)
123 (your address)
(city and province/state)
(postal code/zip)
(your telephone number)
(email address)

-- leave a space

Date on your right ----->

-- leave a space

123 Address/his or her/company name

-- leave a space

Dear (the name),

I would like to have a following opportunity to get permission for a grant to upgrade my subject to Management Indian to Management Global.

I have the necessary experience and tool to advance and preform with excellency.

I can be reached at (your number or email or both) at your convenience. I am looking forward to hear from you.

Sincerely,

Sina (your last name)

(below your real signature)


*** It was an example of what you can use in the body of the letter... You address with respect without sucking a**es too much, keep it formal, simple and clean. They will appreciate more. Make sure you get your oepning, body, conclusion and closing/signature.

I hope it helps.

This is a more professional way on editing a formal letter. ***

Answer 9

Dear Sir,

I am requesting from permission from you to change my subject of Indian Management to Global Management.

Respectfully yours,

Sina

Answer 10

Sir,

I am requesting an opportunity to change my subject, from: management Indian to: management global.

Respectfully,
Sina