I just started a small band, and I'm trying to write us some songs. What do you think of these lyrics.
Loved and Lost
Serious Thought
I should have saw
It in her eyes
Without warning
She started to cry
I tried to get near her
To calm her down
She gave me the cold shoulder
And turned around
Who said it's better
To have loved and lost
I wish I had never
Loved at all
There's a hole in my heart
Feels like it can never be filled
I can't take the pain
I might as well be killed
A few days past
No word from her
I passed her in the halls
And she started to stir
I tried to talk to her
But she ran away
From that day on
She never came my way
Who said it's better
To have loved and lost
I wish I had never
Loved at all
There's a hole in my heart
Feels like it can never be filled
I can't take the pain
I might as well be killed
Her eyes
Were brightest of all the colors
She was unlike any other
I never want to love another
Who said it's better
To have loved and lost
I wish I had never
Loved at all
Who said it's better
(Who said it's better)
To have loved and lost
(To have loved and lost)
I wish I has never
(I wish I has never)
loved at all
(loved at all)
There's a hole in my heart
Feels like it can never be filled
I can't take the pain
I might as well be killed
(I might as well be killed)
2007-01-21 14:54:57 · 3 answers · asked by NoneOfThat 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like them...they are very real and I'm sure the listeners can relate to them which improves the overall song. When I write, I always try to avoid cliche terms like heart, love etc because they are often over used. But in sum, the lyrics are good.
2007-01-21 15:04:23 · answer #1 · answered by GOP - Going Out of Power 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds pretty good to me, I think you may have a hit, go for it!
2007-01-21 23:02:04 · answer #2 · answered by Sage 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
deep.....umm deep
2007-01-21 23:01:33 · answer #3 · answered by msconfused 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋