you know ho you are,
you are the one who stripped my whole life from me,
the one who hurt me, and said that you loved me at the same time.
the one who controlled me and everything i did.
yet i still loved you back
you know who you are
the one who had my family between your fingers,
you were the one who had them turn their backs on me when i needed them most, it was you who they believed, not me.
i dont understand how you did it,but you did,and you did it well
i would ask why you would hurt me so badly
you said becaus you liked to see me bleed and beg you for my life
it was you that made that i couldnt even leave my own home with out fear, it was you who put these scares on me,i have always
prayed that happiness would come again. but i know it wont.
i know who you are and you know who you are.
2007-01-21 13:24:52 · 15 answers · asked by koi 3 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
this was inspirred from something very personal that happened to me
2007-01-21 13:29:58 · update #1
the abusers were my parents
2007-01-21 13:32:32 · update #2
i wrote this 3 years ago when i was 11
im 14
2007-01-21 14:05:02 · update #3
well this poem was acually inspired cuz of my uncle raping me(thats scary)
2007-01-21 18:34:03 · update #4
thats a very deep poem. and you will find happiness again and happiness will find you!
2007-01-21 13:46:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I think this poem is very deep and inspirational for someone in a an abusive relationship. I loved it you are a natural poet.
2007-01-21 21:31:42 · answer #2 · answered by Angel D 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is just rambling and isn't very poetic at all, however, it's not horrible for an 11 year old, and the content is very morbid sorry that you had to go through that and if "poetry" is a good outlet for you that's fine but i wouldn't post it
2007-01-22 19:28:25 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it... i wrote a poem similar about that 2 weeks ago. im goin through the pain right now....and i right poems and stories to try to relieve my pain..but anyways i like it.... good luck and best wishes.
oh yeah im just 15 years old
2007-01-21 22:03:06 · answer #4 · answered by *pretty girl* 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well sure I love all poetry being artistic, but next time you enter a poem that is supposed to be deep and moving check your spelling. : )
2007-01-21 21:30:07 · answer #5 · answered by perpetaully sarcastic 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's okay. I write too.here I have a website for you---
poems-and-quotes.com I have went through someof the same things
Also i mailed you -- mail me back
2007-01-21 21:38:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice work. you should get that published. you can go to poetry.com, and they'll do it free. I am sorry for what happened to you, no one should ever have to go through something like that, but yet, so many people do.
2007-01-22 06:33:58 · answer #7 · answered by Confused & Young 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it it's kinda sad
Future referenec that dosen't go here ot goes in the lit section.
2007-01-21 22:33:54 · answer #8 · answered by Ellion 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it and it sounds like your poetry is a good outlet for your feelings, you obviously have been thru a bad relationship and this is a good way to cope with your feelings
2007-01-21 21:31:05 · answer #9 · answered by luke 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes, very deep
2007-01-21 21:28:18 · answer #10 · answered by experiencedmommy 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋