You probably think that Abercrombie and Hollister are the same clothing stores, but they’re really not. Even though Abercrombie owns Hollister, and their clothes may seem alike, these two stores are very different from each other. Abercrombie and Hollister are different stores because there is a difference in the money, they sell different types of clothes , and they are used to imitate the styles for different places.
The first reason is that there is a difference in the prices. Actually, Hollister prices are a little bit cheaper then Abercrombie’s. For example, if you go buy a jacket form Abercrombie it will probably be about $60. If you go buy a jacket from Hollister it will probably be about $40.
The second difference is that Hollister and Abercrombie sell different types of clothes. Abercrombie is more of a trendy, classy, expensive type of store as for Hollister which has a more relaxed style. If you went to Hollister most of the clothes would be based on beaches and surfing. If you went to Abercrombie most of the clothes would be casual and luxurious.
Finally, the last difference is that these two stores were made to imitate the styles for the east and the west coast. Abercrombie was made to imitate the style for the east coast but Hollister was made to imitate the style for the west coast. So if you went to the east coast the styles over there would be based on Abercrombie and if you went to the west coast the styles would be based on Hollister.
2007-01-21 08:29:09 · 26 answers · asked by Anonymous in Beauty & Style ➔ Fashion & Accessories
thank u soooo much for reading my eassy!!! i hope u like it...please put any comment you want about it
2007-01-21 08:29:48 · update #1
is that for school? that isnt a very good essay topic for school. if you were going to write about abercrombie and hollister for a school essay i would talk about how some people hate it and claim it is racist or something a little more interesting.
and also it isnt very well written. "the first reason" and "second difference" are not very good ways to start a paragraph, you should have better lead ins to paragraphs. maybe "although some people say the hollister and abercrombie sell the same type of clothes they really have very different styles..." that may not be the best but it is better than what you have.
and also the prices are not right. hollister denim jackets are $50-$60.and their winter jackets are about $120. whereas abercrombies denim jackets are $100 and their winter coats are about $160 ( i think).
i would also suggest finding more examples and describe more.
oh and the last paragraph is totally made up, people where i live on the east coast people wear hollister and abercrombie and i actually prefer hollister. so that paragraph isnt very true.
yea sorry this was kind of harsh but it is just to help make the essay better, good luck.
2007-01-21 08:42:32 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
It's very good. But I have some things to tell you:
About your facts:
-You should mention in the lead that Abercrombie owns Hollister.
-Abercrombies customers are 18-26 and Hollister's are 11-17
-The prices are off. You need 2 be more accurate, girl! Hollister denim jackets are about $80. Abercrombie's are about $100.
The essay itself:
It needs more of "you" in there. But you pinions and really keep the reader's attention with facts to backup your opinions instead of stating the facts. That saying that an essay should never have the word "I" in there? That's totally wrong.
Add more interesting transitions. "First," "second", and "finally" make it sound so official. Add more to the essay with interesting transitions.
Include a conclusion that connects to your lead, but not the same thing.
Make some edits, and I'm telling you, it'll do very good for whatever you want it to be for.
2007-01-21 08:50:03 · answer #2 · answered by past praying for 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Abercrombie cannot be classy and trendy. classy lasts forever, trendy is out in a minute. And you cant get a jacket at AF for 60. jackets are 200. and 150 at hollister. i work at both. its actually the same style other than one is east coast, one is west, but if you go into both they have basically the same shirts with slight differences and different quality. Abercrombies target audience is 18-26 and sells MISSES sizes (0,2,4), Hollister is 11-17 hence why they sell JUNIORS sizes (1,3,5). Hollister is less because its made that way. I work at both stores while im in school.
2007-01-21 08:35:30 · answer #3 · answered by hallie 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-31 22:32:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need a concusion
the paragraphs should be longer than two sentences.
There should be more details or examples like that give more of an answer as to why theres a difference in price or the reason why abercrombie and hollister are based on opposite coasts.Is it to gain a bigger market?
Put more of your opinions in it.It seems like your just stating information.
Dont put the first example,second example...since its obviously apparent to the reader.
2007-01-21 08:58:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
It's personally too bland and short for my taste. If your gonna do abercrombie and hollister add a little voice into it. Occassionally say something dumb (but not retarded) It makes you sound funny. In order to be a writer you have to entertain the reader. I was personally bored. I have gotten a lotts praise and awards for my writing so I hope that helps. BY the way I like the topic.
2007-01-21 10:35:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I admire your subject. I love both stores. But (now don't take this wrong, I"m just trying to help out!) if you are handing this for school, you might want to look over grammar, opinions, and facts. Just giving you a heads up! By the way, how old are you? that makes a difference too!
2007-01-21 08:57:59 · answer #7 · answered by volleyball girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
why would you even bother to write this? everyone knows that abercrombie and hollister sells different styles of clothing
2007-01-21 08:32:49 · answer #8 · answered by random_person 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
haha it wasn't too bad! I'm really surprised that you made an essay on Abercrombie and Hollister! thats pure talent!
2007-01-21 08:32:36 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it was a pretty good essay but i never shop at those stores if you made one on HOT TOPIC and abercrombie there would be many more differences and zero alikes me personally i hate abercrombie and love HOT TOPIC band shirts and make up and everything that would be an interesting essay you would have to go in HOT TOPIC only if you have the guts
2007-01-21 08:39:23 · answer #10 · answered by skully101@verizon.net 2 · 0⤊ 3⤋