desperate call,tears rolling down his cheeks,in a never ending race,rolling ever slower,trying to find their place,getting lonelier by the minute,his tear's keep on flowing,he turn's and walk's away,as the silent winds keep on blowing.
Wrote this poem when I was 18.Am now 39 and just want some other views of this.
2007-01-20 16:23:15 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Sounds like typical teenage angst. It's emotionally charged; it speaks of wretchedness, dealt by exclusion. The irony is, loneliness is so common. There's impatience, too, the "when is it my turn?" feeling. It makes me sort of resent this concept of "true love" society worships, so thoroughly woven into our culture that we see it as something essential to our happiness, and that all we can do is wait for it. Love poems, and love-less poems, are a dime a dozen, if that, but they're nearer to the surface than others issues, I guess, and more easily expressed (and have already been expressed). And what of your twenty-one years since then, I wonder? Still a victim?
PS. I hope you didn't want a real poetry critique, because you're in the philosophy section
2007-01-20 17:53:14 · answer #1 · answered by alethiaxx 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting... Maybe the writer should have added a woman to this mans life... That's cruel...
Seriously though - I feel this...
I hope that the character figures out that life takes us in very interesting places for good reasons. Maybe life has given him this road to meet up with a woman that has had many heartbreaks. Surly they will make a perfect match based upon their living experience.
Post it on Poerty.com
It's really good.
2007-01-20 16:37:13 · answer #2 · answered by Venom Spartan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hello friend !
Kindly change your feel as on body is alone, one cannot be alone as the lord is always with us ,it is we who forget him and feel alone.
As for the rolling of tears, longing for the love of the lord,just like the feeling of mother's cuddling, is only natural gut feeling of our remembrance of this love. Kindly note sitting with this feeling for long may trigger the compassion of the lord and all of a sudden let you be enlightened, This may be in the form of visions of light.
The way to it consciously is called path of love (bakthi marga) this will require you to give up every thing and dive deeply in the ocean of love with out caring for anything in life.
2007-01-20 16:47:10 · answer #3 · answered by mr.kotiankar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If God created guy in his own image, then guy shows us what God is like, top? What you're asserting is, if God is benevolent and guy is malevolent, then guy isn't made in God's image. it relatively is logical. yet what I say is, God created guy with the skill for sick, and positively there could nicely be no longer something in creation which does no longer embody polar opposites. I nevertheless have faith that guy is made in in basic terms like god ... and female too, and that tells you lots approximately what God is like. diverse from how maximum Christians think of him, I fancy.
2016-10-31 21:29:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i feel the man is lost, confussed in life. he doesn't know his meaning in this world.
2007-01-20 16:39:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad. Has a certain rhythm to it.
2007-01-20 16:28:03 · answer #6 · answered by Sophist 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
liebeskummer
google it!
2007-01-21 01:02:40 · answer #7 · answered by jamie F. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋