2007-01-20 12:59:40 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Since this sounds more like an incident rather than an essay and u haven't clearly mentioned wat this is abt i wuold suggest this:
Everything suddenly became quiet.The rain had stopped making lashing sounds against the window pane....the thunder had stopped roaring....the power had *** down.....
u can tell about some burglary or something when u were alone
2007-01-20 13:07:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a narrative essay right?
(sounds like it so I will assume yes even though its an *** for u and me lol)
everything suddenly became quiet, I turned to my classmates only to be in pure fear of their shocked expression, I had wonder as to what was going on so I turned my head being in tremendous fear myself, to see the principal come into the classroom with a ___________
Sorry I cannot conclude this but you need to a be a bit more specific can this whole story be very unrealistic or what in that case I continue the sentence with....
A army of these strange looking creatures to which the likes I have never seen before.
OR
with a 1,000 question test. Had my worst nighmare become a reality. I only shivered in my seat thinking of how unprepared I was for this moment.
2007-01-20 13:24:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Everythin suddenly became quiet. The students stood in awe as the principal walked into the classroom and told the students the result of the dreadful test they took.
Is that the only requirement? Does it have to be about something in particular? I need more details
2007-01-20 13:04:23 · answer #3 · answered by melinda_trvn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Makes me think of of a courtroom docket, suitable after a come to a decision kilos down his gavel. it is going quiet for the defendant who's have been given here in the time of in charge (greater acceptable dramatic if he somewhat isn't), quiet for the kin of, say, a murdered sufferer who breathes a sigh of relief and silently weeps, quiet for the kin of the defendant. OR the sensation you adventure as you dive into the water and each little component is going quiet, no count if that's a exciting day on the pool or an adventure to discover the sea or going snorkelling... there is not any shrink to your techniques's eye. i wish this helps.
2016-12-16 09:28:06 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Umm...how bout this.....
"Everything suddenly became quiet. With the window now closed, and the lights turned out, my room seems very lonely. No noise. No light. Just thoughts. Thoughts about the day I had today".....
And so on.....
2007-01-20 13:09:11 · answer #5 · answered by Obi-Wan Kenobi 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1- What is the essay about? Is it a story YOU have to write? A historical event? A book you read/were supposed to read in class or out of class? More details please!!
Everything suddenly became quiet. All the heads in the town square turned as Amos Small was marched down the street to his execution. I turned my head away, as was proper for young ladies. THe village hansman stood him next to the noose as mayor John Troud announced "Amos Small- sentenced to death for the murder of Lucy McAlaster on May 12, 1895. Do you have any last words or regrets, Mr. Small?" Mr.roud had a nasty look in his eye. I didn't like it one bit. "I swaer I didn't murder Miss Lucy. Loved her like a sister I did. Neer any harm came to the girl by my hand. I pity you folk. Still got a murderer runnin' 'round this town. Tsk. tsk tsk. Goodbye to you...." Mr. Troud had slipped the noose over his neck and the masked hangsman pulled it tight and slipped his fotting out from underneath him. I barely had time to look away before the sight of Mr.Smalls body swung down, his neck cracking. I held tight to my father. "Its alright Mary.." He whispered into my ear. How could he think everything was alright? Didn't Mr.Small say he was innocent? Things were getting very different in our small town very fast and I didn't like the sum of things so far. It was very scary. THink of it- a murderer on the loose? Anyone of us could be next.
2007-01-20 19:00:08 · answer #6 · answered by Cora 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you need to give us a bit more to work with here. What's the essay, story about?
2007-01-20 13:07:34 · answer #7 · answered by fdm215 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well... it would help if you told us about what kind of essay this was. btw, this sounds more like a fictional narrative of some sort rather than an essay...
2007-01-20 13:03:50 · answer #8 · answered by Team_Balla 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Then the scarriest thing walked through the door dun dun dun....
THe Tele Tubbies thank god they took those monsters off the air... lol
2007-01-20 13:04:20 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Everthing suddenly became quiet.......
2007-01-20 13:17:32 · answer #10 · answered by kevferg64 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋