do you like this poem?

Question

i am not a poet or anything it just question!
eternity

i lie in bed @ night & pray,
that you will think of me.
i cry until my eyelids close,
and dream--eternity.

i wake to sunlight on my face,
for a moment i forget.
then a cloud passes by,
and i realize, this is it.

i carry on throughtout the day,
feigning joy, and feeling pain.
i long to gaze upon your face,
and share a smile, and embrace.

the day is drawing to an end,
and still i think of you.
i try to relax, yet in my mind,
i wonder what to do.

so now i lay me down to sleep,
i pray the lord, my soul will keep.
and should you chance to think of me,
know that i love you---eternally.

by deiah
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Answer 1

It was real nice Deiah.

Here's one for you; Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the lord my car to keep.
If it should roll before I wake,
I pray the Lord to pull the brake. Bye

Answer 2

A beautiful poem.

Answer 3

i love it! god i could not write anything like that. i like it even more becuz to see someone who could write better than me inspires me!

Answer 4

its nice