What do you think of these lyrics?

Question

yes im in a band and i want to know if these lyrics to this song we play would mean anything to anyone..and if anyone would like us before we get really into it...not all of our songs have to do with this sort of thing..this is the only protest song we've made but we don't perform yet.......i can;t explain the beat of the song so i guess you can try to make one up yourself ...but yeah it sounds a lot better in song =\


i'm spinning around in circles today
and i can feel the knife in my side
but i'm still alive
while tons of people are silent but dying
your b.itchin about living
b.itching and living

your not gonna
go and shut me up this time
we won't ever be casted away
i'm not the first one!

oh cry cry
your poor lucky life is all
is a part of the same lie
they've told you again and again
and you pay no mind
but you cry
when those dirty, lonely, cold
people die

i know you
you've seen a million of us on the street
but you have no time
to listen or care or believe
what we say
and this is all my fault anyway
its only what you think

they feel scared too
and lonely, mad, sad, disappointed
who cares
they dont have the knowledge to speak
but i speak for them
we dont share the same brain
but i feel all their pain
i'm not the only one!

oh whine whine
your poor lucky life
just cant get any worse
its the same lie
and you pay no mind that
they can't say a word
but they feel just like you do inside
all for the human progression
is all they test

open up your eyes
your not blind
you can hear the cries
just listen
won't shut me up
inside
we are the same,,,,
and i'm one of millions!

thanks for the honesty....but i dont think im that illiterate..

Answer 1

we are the same,,,,
and i'm one of millions


yeah
got some compromises

Answer 2

For someone who can't tell "you're" from "your" this is amazing - there are even a few sensible phrases in it all! If you keep doing this, in some 15 years your English will be on a 3rd grader's level! It's pretty funny that someone so illiterate wants to preach pompous and preposterous quasi-wisdom, too, so you made me giggle quite a bit, thanks.
As for the idea and expecially realization: laughable.

Answer 3

sure, it is approximately the evil of guy. except, i incredibly doubt that the satan had some thing to do with the demise of jesus, the one hundred years conflict, the russian revolution, the blitzkrieg in international conflict two, both kennedy assassinations, or the folks killed at the hippie path. so it have to all had been guy's doing. it is a cool historical past lesson even though.

Answer 4

WOW I REALLY LIKE IT! hopefully you can get to a recording studio and make a CD or something, good stuff right there!!


good luck!

Answer 5

I'm a little bored to read it all but i'm sure it's perfect!Keep up the good work! :-)

Answer 6

nonsense and its too long to get recorded