how do you like my writing?

Question

How do you like my writing there is articles on a lot of different subjects could you give me your opinion on one of my articles that you read the most thought out answer gets the points they are to to long to post in here so here is the link please read any one of them
also what subject would you like to see more on anything at all

http://www.helium.com/user/show/50079

Answer 1

I offer the following advice...take it or leave it.

1. Consistently capitalize and use proper punctuation, spell check, etc. It makes you look a lot more professional when you do these small but important things. For example, I noticed that you used a lowercase "i" and misspelled "sense". Not the biggest problem in the world, but readers notice.

2. Consider breaking up large chunks of text into smaller sections. It is psychologically daunting to the reader when he or she sees a "wall" of text with no breaks, whether or not your content is good.

You write relatively well, in general. Just take your time and make your writing more readable.

God bless.

Answer 2

I read Nightime Blues and was impressed at the depth of feeling. The surprise ending was heartbreaking. But much art is heartbreaking. Someone once said, without pain there would be no art. Pain is indeed a grand inspiration, andyou've done some fine work. Thank you.

Answer 3

i have read it, and dont be surprised because i love reading so i read fast, and i think that it is very nice, the way u talk and write is amazing and i have most of them

Answer 4

mi imaginary dog colud do better

Answer 5

it sucks. i read like two sentences and was bored out of my fuucking mind!!!