I am comparing how creating a building and destroying it to love and pain that it causes. Please help me it is due on Tuesday!!!
Thank you
Here is the link....
http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-jk6t97E6baeVNfuUpENdCzA-?cq=1&p=39
2007-01-19 17:04:50 · 3 answers · asked by in LOVE with... 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
There are several spelling mistakes.It should be too easy and their mind instead of there.Its a good essay about love.Carat instead of kt.Nowhere needs to be close together.Good luck.
2007-01-19 17:21:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
"Building includes time and patience; destroying only seconds to trigger the explosives. Which sounds more fun? To one person building might be fun while, destroying the building may bring someone else happiness. " First, what are you trying to tell ? you must portray your purpose clearly in the first paragraph otherwise the readers are confused. What's with the "building" ? you have to define your main point, because unclear points would only confused and bored the readers.
2007-01-19 18:53:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok..
2007-01-19 17:21:39 · answer #3 · answered by shiny_starz 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋