Looky loo looky loo
My name is Stew
This is my debut
I am from Kalamazoo
While I was walking thru the zoo
Listening to some Blink 182
I got some poo on my shoe
Over by the bamboo
It looks like fresh doggy doo
It's got a greenish sort of hue
Stuck on there like glue
It could be from a panda or kangaroo
When I got home I showed it to my crew
I took off my shoe to give them a better view
The only one to speak up was my buddy lou
He recommended cleaning with shampoo
Just thought I would ask you to review
See if you thought that would do
Or if it is possibly untrue
To me it seemed a bit askew
With that I will bid you adue
And once again, thank you
2007-01-19 09:57:51 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i actually thought that was pretty hot. put it to a hot beat and u could go places
2007-01-19 10:04:13 · answer #1 · answered by makedarad22 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
O.M.G! This is sure to change the state of the world! No more crime or poverty or indifference! Racism is finished!, as well as world hunger! The world has been waiting, trepidiciously, for this wonderful work to emerge! Congradulations on having the Gods choose you, as the one to proclaim their divine opinion to the huddled masses, eager for salvation!
Just kidding! it was funny!
2007-01-19 10:07:31 · answer #2 · answered by Big hands Big feet 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
U R TOO GOOD!! If I could say more I surley would. Even if I could? Do U think I should? Or say no more not be a bore, or let my fingers do the talkin, and let all the others go on balkin! I liked your rhyme I enjoyed our time, now its time for a gin and lime!
2007-01-19 10:15:40 · answer #3 · answered by bodacious baby 7 · 2⤊ 2⤋
I tend to agree with stew
that you should use shampoo
to clean the poo
and some disinfectant too
and kill the germs that make you spew
2007-01-19 10:04:07 · answer #4 · answered by sundancer332003 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I would say that the hip hop community is doing fine without you but you may want to consider writing comedic pamphlets geared toward twelve-year-old boys.
2007-01-19 10:02:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
While your rhyme is certainly good
I get the feeling that I never should
have read it.
...oh, darn it.
2007-01-19 10:03:16 · answer #6 · answered by the Boss 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
- i didn't like it. but i think you should take that and make it about something more important in life instead of doggy doo. -
2007-01-19 10:04:02 · answer #7 · answered by apolloK♫ 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
You gotta be kidding me. You a rap wanna be. It has to flow natural. Not like your waky scroll. Don't attemt to rap again. Or I will have to tell your friends. My advice to you is this. Don't you rap or you'll get dissed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-01-19 10:05:56 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
That's just talent. you should get signed haha
2007-01-19 10:01:41 · answer #9 · answered by La Princesa 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Lmao you're a poet! did you know it?
2007-01-19 10:01:59 · answer #10 · answered by Viviana 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋