I'm singing this song to my girlfriend on her birthday. please do comment thanks!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
You're so hot and I know it..
So let's cut the crap and get onto it..
When you're blowin up my phone
And stealing my heart away secretly..
Maybe you ain't good enough
Or I ain't that bad though
But you're driving me insane
If you were someone with just no brains
I would gladly get hooked onto you
And let's get onto the groove right now honey~
Sweetness is what we desire for
Sourness is what we encounter daily
Spice is what gets us makin out with each other
Bitterness makes us wanna get over with it
Love is what exists between you and me
So just stop hesitating and....
LAUGH WITH ME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
:D I'm sure my girlfriend will like it??
2007-01-18 19:43:17 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Liked everything but the last line! What's to laugh about exactly?
PS Hope you're not going to wear the hat when you sing it!
2007-01-18 20:10:24 · answer #1 · answered by Bart S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lyrics might desire to have a narrative that grabs the objective audience mind-blowing away. you elect a sturdy Hook to start with. Your refrain lines are washy and lost. The verse is like none. So i assume it is coming from an beginner, yet as you reported, i think of she'll like it and in all probability she would be in a position to.
2016-10-07 09:33:45 · answer #2 · answered by bungay 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really cool! I'm sure it'd be a huge hit!
2007-01-18 19:54:32 · answer #3 · answered by ☺Catriona♥S☺ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
quite funny.
2007-01-18 19:50:19 · answer #4 · answered by ira a 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
very funny and sweet i would love it :)
2007-01-18 19:47:05 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
it looks cool - better sung!!
2007-01-18 19:47:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋