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Question

i'm a primary 5 student,and now i am having a problem in my composition,i am not good at writing compos so please anyone help.thanks now here is the title(not really.)

You were taking a walk in the botanical gardens.As you were admiring the swans in the pond, you saw a hand waving wildly in the water.
Make use of following points in the story.
- how you felt.
- what did you do
- what happened to the person in the water
- what happen to the person in the end.

please i need this very agently,so please help me and the compo must be atleast 200 hundred words and no ridiculars answers.

Answer 1

Here is 324 words. Enjoy!

It was a hot day and I decided to take a walk along the local pond. I was new to the area and had never before considered strolling along the path which wandered in and out of the trees and shrubs. As I came round a large bush I saw that the surface of the pond had been disturbed.

At first I thought a swan had landed so I stopped walking and looked down into the crystal clear liquid. Deep in the water I saw a hand frantically waving. My heart leapt as I realized that somebody was in trouble.

Without thinking, I took off my shoes and jumped over the railing. The water was cold but so clear I quickly got my bearings and started to swim towards the hand. I realized that my air was giving out quickly and I decided I would have to surface before reaching whoever was at the other end of that hand.

But then I thought that if I was short of breath, just how short of breath was the other person. So I redoubled my efforts and reached the person and at that moment I realized that what was waving at me was a beautiful mermaid. I took her hand and the minute I did I no longer needed to reach the surface to breathe.

Suddenly, I was a peace in the water and able to breath without effort. We looked into each other’s eyes and I knew that this was the person I wanted to spend the rest of my life with. Somehow we knew that we were destined to be husband and merwife.

She tugged at my hand and we joyfully swam through a small opening in the bottom of the pond and entered into a beautiful world of singing and joy and peace. I met her folks, they approved of me and we married. And so far, we have lived happily ever after.

Answer 2

Be honest.

The water was beautiful. So clear, so calm. I decided to have a seat at the waters edge, and my body soon felt the tingle of calm. The warmth flowed from my toes to my head, and I felt at peace. My thoughts drifted off to a quiet time in my life. I simply sat there, for how long, I do not know. Suddenly, a hand reached into my peace and yanked me out. "What is it?" I though to myself. "It can't be". But it was. The hand was pale, as though very cold. It was waving wildly at the surface, breaking the calm I had so recently be enraptured by. I felt fear descend upon me. My heart was racing, my palms were sweating.
I made a motion toward the water, then stopped myself. "Is it safe? Is there something dangerous beneath the surface?" I shook my fears aside, and leapt into the cold, clear, pond.

Make it up as you go.

Answer 3

At first i thought they were just waving at me, then i realized they were drowning. I felt the Adrenalin flow rush and jumped in the lake. As I approached the person i told them to relax i was going to help. I grabbed them and was trying to flip them over to their back when she grabbed my head and almost pulled me down. I finely got them on their back and put my arm around the back of the head so i could hold their head out of the water. I started swimming with one arm while pulling them behind me with the other making sure my grip kelp their head up. When we got to shore we both lay there for a moment to catch our breath. She was OK because of i got to her in time and saved her life. Now we are friends for life.
There you go i got you started...my spelling is not good comma are not right and tense is messed up so do not just ccp. and go ...fix it to your own words and make it your own...I just gave you the story line.
Read up on water rescue..that is just the part i remember...I was here trying to do it on my self...I just remember teaching it to the girls when they were little...you can also give CPR and breaths in the water...I forget how to write it out though. I really need to refresh myself with that...OH you may want to say you just finished the water rescue course.

Answer 4

You might could work this quote in, as the person was more than likely drowning....

I was much further out than you thought and was not waving, but drowning.
Stevie Smith

Answer 5

Let me see--you want someone to write the whole thing for you--NOT.