Sentence 1:This program will help me get closer to my goal (to become an obstetrician).
2007-01-18 14:17:59 · 10 answers · asked by mr.gl00my™ 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Successful completion of this program will assist me in achieving my goal (to become an obstetrician).
Successfully completing this program is an essential part of achieving my goal.
Completion of this program will enable me to achieve my goal.
Hope those help! Good luck.
2007-01-18 14:25:32 · answer #1 · answered by Shibi 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This program will help me become an obstetrician.
"get closer to my goal" is redundant, as the above sentence makes it clear that becoming an obstetrician is a goal.
2007-01-18 22:27:57 · answer #2 · answered by sonyack 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To become an obstetrician, this program will help me get closer to my goal
2007-01-18 22:23:29 · answer #3 · answered by :DsMiLe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This program will help me achieve my goal of becoming an obstetrician.
2007-01-18 22:35:08 · answer #4 · answered by bird_brain_88 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My goals of becoming an obstetrician will be enhanced by this program.
2007-01-18 22:27:44 · answer #5 · answered by janetrmi 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Loose the commas and state what you want.
This program will help me further my goal to be an obstetrician.
2007-01-18 22:23:10 · answer #6 · answered by K. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This program is a way towards my goal.
2007-01-18 22:23:18 · answer #7 · answered by Jonia 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Involvement in this program brings me closer to my goal.
My goal will be enhanced by this program.
Don't get so wordy. Your objective will get lost.
2007-01-18 22:25:53 · answer #8 · answered by allisoneast 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This program will increase my knowledge in the field of obstetrics to obtain my degree.
2007-01-18 22:24:04 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i be a obstetrician
2007-01-18 22:21:43 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋