Treat me like you wanted to be treated and i'll do my part dont leave me in the darkness with a broken heart.. Time heals all wounds but to the heart never forgotten.. You can buy me all things but love can not be boughten.. Just be my friend when i need one the most, be right there to understand that when all else fails i need you to hold my hand and guide me through. Though sticks and stones may break my bones your words i can never erase i dont want to be alone and no one to take your place... Everything i say and everything i do i want you to know at the end of the day just how much i love you...
2007-01-17 18:13:24 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
can you relate to this its about the things ive been through with family and friends
2007-01-17 18:16:11 · update #1
AwWw... omg I love it!! I want to email it to my husband overseas! I'll give you credit of course.
2007-01-17 18:20:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm sorry that i did no longer get the possibility to study them. we are on holiday for an prolonged weekend and that i've got been checking in each so often to get faraway from the gang, yet i could no longer stay hidden for long. Reporting is merciless, yet juvenile. i don't understand the way a poem some son must be considered a submit against the Yahoo "community" regulations. EDIT: thank you for posting the poem, Ma. that's a gorgeous poem, crammed with excitement and gratitude. The so-suggested as "community" must be run by using machines.
2016-12-12 14:09:00 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very nice. If you wrote this for a special person, then it will make them feel special.
You have a talent. I wish I could write a poem. I have tried and end up just being able to express my self as if I were writing a letter.
2007-01-17 18:27:41 · answer #3 · answered by DeeJay 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, but correct your English.
Say ' a poem I have written' and 'boughten' is not a word unless you want to make it one.
Good feelings ... bad English.
Jonnie
2007-01-17 18:25:24 · answer #4 · answered by Jonnie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why are you wasting such a talent?.... you definitely have potential.... i myself am a song/poem writer, and i have to tell you this is absolutely beautiful, you have a writing style that is unique and heartfelt, keep up the good work.
2007-01-17 18:55:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do poetry too.
And I will be honest.
I really am not into rhyming poetry or poetry that is too ...blunt or too the point.
I like a little mystery.
But, your poem is really good.
I think it would make a great song, actually.
2007-01-17 18:21:59 · answer #6 · answered by Dream 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, it's from the heart
2007-01-17 18:16:04 · answer #7 · answered by upallnight 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, thats beautiful.
2007-01-17 18:16:23 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ye it's nice but have to improve in poem witting ok
2007-01-17 18:18:03 · answer #9 · answered by Vinod v 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good; however, I don't really care for poems that rhyme. Hey, you asked for our opinion....
2007-01-17 18:16:18 · answer #10 · answered by Mom of One in Wisconsin 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋