have you ever felt this way? (my poem)?

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SLOWLY DIE WITH YOU


COME TO ME, MY SHINING LIGHT,
CAST YOUR SPELL, OF LOVE, SO TRUE,
RELEASE YOUR DESIRES, INTO MY TRUST,
AND I WILL QUENCH, A THIRST, FOR YOU.

LETS LAY BENEATH, THE SILVER SKYS,
AND WISH UPON THIS NIGHT,
OF LOVERS COMING, TO DREAM A DREAM,
AND WORSHIP, IN SOFT MOONLIGHT.

LETS STAND, UPON THE MOUNTAINTOPS,
TO TAKE OUR PASSIONS HIGH,
FOR, BREATHE INTO, THIS MASK OF AIR,
AND TELL THE WORLD GOODBYE.

LETS RIDE, THE OCEAN WAVES, ALL DAY,
AND FEEL, THE STINGING, OF THE SAND,
LOOK INTO, LOVING EYES, AND KNOW,
THE PEACE, OF OUR PROMISED LAND.

ENGULF MY LIPS, WITH, YOUR PASSION,
A FEELING, TO NEVER, EXPIRE,
WARM THE HANDS, THAT TOUCH YOUR FLESH,
AND CATCH US BOTH ON FIRE.

I CATCH MY BREATH, ALL OVER AGAIN,
EACH TIME, MY FINGERS TRACE,
I LIE WITH YOU, IN SOLITUDE,
WRAPPED UP IN YOUR EMBRACE.

COLLAPSE WITH ME, WITH LEGS ENTWINED,
UPON CRISP SHEETS, OF BLUE,
AND I WILL CLOSE MY EYES, TO LIFE,
AND SLOWLY DIE, WITH YOU.
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Answer 1

My wife and child were killed in an accident,we loved each other like that .my wife and I.I wish this .yes I do .But that is all gone now. only in my dreams is this reality for me now
as I am like the lone dolphin that's swimming in the sea after his mate died, alone forever. just my dreams and memory's alive in me.
your poem touched me. Thank you.

Answer 2

Erotic no, providing it truly is been written tastefully. I do evaluate besides the undeniable fact that there is a superb line between what's erotic and what might want to be considered obscene. hence the decision of language is paramount and if the challenge count number is too express, it would want to easily be a no no for my section. i does no longer experience extra soreness if the poem became written by a woman providing it truly is no longer me it truly is written it. I nonetheless have the body of recommendations it takes a courageous lady to target to tackle this challenge count number.per chance i'm slightly shy. i'd experience uncomfortable writing about it, yet perchance no longer interpreting it. Edit: Love the link Synopsis has given for Victoria timber - very, very humorous.

Answer 3

I feel this way alot. It's so sad to me that I have never had someone in my life that felt that way about me at the same time. I think every woman on the planet dreams of having someone to love so deeply that even in death you are happy. I wish I could have that deep connection with another human being besides my children. Thanks for the poem.

Answer 4

frankly I've never felt so threatened and manipulable.