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I'd like to talk to you about the importance of the family
we usually forget the importance of family because they are always with us.
Family is the most precious existence. Let's love and do well when they are with us

2007-01-17 13:01:30 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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I'd like to talk to you about the importance of *you don't need the "the"* family.
we usually forget *how important our families are* because they are always with us.
Family is the most precious existence. Let's love and do well when they are with us.

I think it sounds better like that but I don't quite understand the last sentence. Do you mean something like, "Let's love and cherish them"?

2007-01-17 13:32:27 · answer #1 · answered by MissUnderstood 3 · 0 1

I would like to talk about the importance of 'family'.
We usually forget how important a family is to us, as its members are around us all the time.
A family is a very precious relationship in our lives. Let us love all in the family, and wish each other success.

2007-01-17 22:47:59 · answer #2 · answered by greenhorn 7 · 0 0

I'd like to talk to you about the importance of family.
We often forget the importance of family because they are always there.
Family is the most precious thing we have. Let's love and appreciate them while they are with us.

This sounds OK to me - although we have used 'family' as plural in the second sentence ('they are') and as singular in the third sentence ('family is').

2007-01-17 23:50:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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