A man asked a guy if he thought he was handsome,
the guy said...no.
the man asked him if he would want to be with him forever....
and the guy said no.
the man then asked him if he were to leave would he cry,
and once again the guy replied with a no.
the man had heard enough. As he walked away, tears streaming down his face
the guy grabbed the man's arm and said....
You're not handsome you're
incredible.
I don't want to be with you forever, I NEED to be with you forever.
And I wouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
It is a poem i wrote for my bf at one time.
2007-01-17 11:28:10 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
absoultely beautiful, stunning i loved it!
2007-01-17 15:08:32 · answer #1 · answered by pa625 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dont get me wrong- its well written as in the context but I dont really consider it a poem. I read it out loud . It was too repeditive with the no's. You couldnt feel the flow when reading it in a poem sense
2007-01-17 19:41:50 · answer #2 · answered by Tbay56 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds and is constructed like a poor riddle. it dosen't look or read like a poem at all.
2007-01-17 19:33:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very touching concept, but poor structure, not very "poem like", keep working on it...
2007-01-17 19:36:18 · answer #4 · answered by love*pink 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really cool!!!!
2007-01-17 19:32:29 · answer #5 · answered by Broken Key 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋