you say i'm like a hero to you
well you have not seen me
you don't know me, one good deed will NOT
make up for my thouands of bad deeds
one good deed will not help a young soul that has been
mutalated
one good deed can not mend a broken heart
all you know i cryed wolf
you do not know my past nor my future
you can not help me or mend me.
you are not god
NOR am i
so don't say i'ma hero or a good person
FOR YOU HAVE NOT SCRATCHED THE SURFACE
SO please do not judge on frist impression..
by jada
on a scale of 1 to 10 1 being the worst and 10 being the best. the story be hind it is
my teacher in school was mad and gave the whole class a hard test,unless the person who was wisling said that they did it. well i said i did it.so he sent me out of class and but i can't wistle.and since than he said i was nice and stuff you get the point. thanks
2007-01-17 10:38:31 · 16 answers · asked by i love my son wyatt 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
WOW - I would love to know how old you are. I believe you have an amazing future. The rating for the poem would greatly depend on your age but it is full of passion and passion is all you need to be great at whatever you do. You have everything that you need to be a great poet.
2007-01-17 10:54:22 · answer #1 · answered by Chentelle 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-01-17 18:50:24 · answer #2 · answered by lyndee222 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As a proper poem I give it a 5, but for substance and content - I give it a 10. This one act of kindness to the entire class does say more about you than you want it too. You should show your question to this teacher and his/her supervisor as they are so quick to make one kid guilty. Unless they get better at their jobs, they should not be teaching kids. A teacher that threatens an entire class for the action of one kid is disgusting and violates the entire profession. Poorest job performance ever.
2007-01-17 18:46:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all I would use spell check. The poem is ok, it is all about releasing your inner feelings, come out with it already and tell the truth instead of going through the inner turmoil you must be feeling. My rating is about 7. Good luck to you!!
2007-01-17 18:43:50 · answer #4 · answered by lavachk1 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the story is nice but as a poem?
between 2 and 3.
2007-01-17 18:44:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's pretty deep.you should be a poet. i give it a 9.9 and i took off the extra point for spelling but overall that was really good.
2007-01-17 18:58:27 · answer #6 · answered by halima b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its good i give it a 91/2
2007-01-17 18:42:54 · answer #7 · answered by Jonathan S 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
huh. good story. the poem, depending on how old you are, is like a 6. ish.
2007-01-17 18:42:24 · answer #8 · answered by whazzah 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWESOME POEM i think u should be a poet i give it a 11
2007-01-17 18:44:18 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i'd give it a 6. it makes a lot of sense. and it it's pretty good.
2007-01-17 18:42:44 · answer #10 · answered by rainyday<3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋