It's hard to sit back and think sometimes,
I must admit on more than one occasion I've felt trapped
I try not to cower before a total loss of control
Words cannot describe how pleased I am to have you back
(Bridge)
You're here with me and only me, there's nothing in this world I'd rather feel
Just you
(Chorus)
As we walk on
Hand in hand, arm in arm
Embracing this love we share, it's such a precious thing
We know we'll hold on
Through it all, weather any storm
I can't ever see myself feeling as good as this
So caught up in the whirlwind of livin' our lives
We almost forget to take time out to think about what we have got
I know you just can't put a price on these feelings,
Ever since i came face to face with cupids arrow and was shot
Bridge again
Chorus
Thinking about you makes it hard to clear my mind
Seeing your face in my head when you're not here makes me smile
I've never been someone too shy to show his emotions
I don't care how grounded i feel right now, i can touch the sky
2007-01-17 02:06:55 · 11 answers · asked by daveslater2005 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Please if you're just on here to be rude and give negative comments for the sake of it, don't.
Negative or positive feedback is welcomed though :)
Cheers
2007-01-17 02:08:08 · update #1
i think so long as there is love, there will be love songs.
they sell so i think they will carry on
when groups like the cheeky girls get a deal for singing "touch my bum, don't be shy", i think that gives people every chance to make it if they want to
2007-01-17 02:26:00 · update #2
Does the world really need another song about some bloke telling us how much he loves his bird ?
2007-01-17 02:14:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
I found it a tad boring...but like a few folk have said...we cant really judge because we don't really know what kinda music, what temp etc is gonna go with it...at the moment, its just like reading a soppy poem.
You made a point about the cheeky girls "touch my bum" lyric, and you suggested that IF THEY CAN MAKE IT ANYONE CAN...
well...love them or hate them....that lyric "touch my bum, etc etc" may NOT be the mostf antastic and poetic in the world, but HOLD FECK was it catchy AND different...and it got the song noticed...EVERYONE but EVERYONE knew that line!!!
As far as I am concerned you need something with a hook,, or something bloody catchy to make your songs stand out from the other middle of the road romantic slush-fests
2007-01-18 02:31:14 · answer #2 · answered by Steve h 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice but it's just a repeat of a billion other love songs , to be successful a love song has to be either very personal in such a way as to make the listener think they are sharing your secret or incredibly profound in a way that makes the listener think you understand their own deepest secrets , you must put into words thoughts that everyone has but no one will say out loud , even a convicted murderer can feel the beauty and pain of love but may never find the ability to express it , so you must do it for them .
2007-01-17 02:17:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
properly, returned then they had lyrics like OOO Bop Shoo Bop, Band Shang A Lang, Do Wa Ditty.... for Bobbt Darin all of the solid words have been taken, he had to return up with Splish Splash. yet heavily, Rock exchange into in it fairly is infancy and assorted hits have been written interior minutes spectacular interior the recording instructions. in case you seem, many had the comparable 3 or for chords. yet in each era of track, there is a few rubbish. Then and now. Heck, i seem at growing to be up by way of Disco and that i'm embarrassed.
2016-10-31 08:43:44 · answer #4 · answered by stever 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very good song but I would have to hear the music/tune that goes a long with it to better understand it(if you know what I mean). You have a real talent and should not give up on it. You should even try to send it to someone!
2007-01-17 02:12:17 · answer #5 · answered by booellis 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good, but would like to see some words cut out of it. What you dont say is important too, let the emotion carry the song not the sentiment. Less is more with lyrics.
2007-01-17 02:23:06 · answer #6 · answered by Northern Spriggan 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
hard to tell without music but i don't like the lyrics very much. it's a bit cheesy in parts and then a bit conversational. i'm trying to think of what type of music you'd put it to.
2007-01-17 05:16:53 · answer #7 · answered by AJ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit mushy for me mate but my gran might like it. Sorry...
2007-01-17 02:12:27 · answer #8 · answered by Martin B 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Dont give up the day job.
2007-01-17 02:44:06 · answer #9 · answered by alan r. 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
honestly it bored me, it sounds like what everybody else writes, i'd try and make it more original.
2007-01-17 02:16:20 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋