I know it needs a bit of work.
but here it is:
I sit here staring out into a dark ebys.
wondering why i was born.
wondering why someone would bring me in this world knowing
i was going to have mental illnesses.
my father abusing me while snorting another line of meth.
yelling "your worthless." and "you were a ******* mistake"
my mother telling me that its my fault.
i sit here.
contemplating why someone could be so cruel
to tear me apart
even when i was just a little girl
that saddest part
is i cant even help myself.
2007-01-16 19:21:57 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
it made me cry
2007-01-16 19:25:45 · answer #1 · answered by thatguy 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Your poem is evidence that will be used against your parents when they are called into account for their misdeeds. Be patient and know that any wrongdoing done to you by man or mama, by friend or father will not go unpaid. Everyone will be taken into account for their deeds. Know that your parents are simply piling coal on their heads.. Your poem is a cry for help. You are not as helpless as you seem. You do have a way of seeing and expressing yourself. This is a strength. Use it.
2007-01-17 03:39:34 · answer #2 · answered by me 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
**** like this is deep. nah mean its good tho. really it gives u a more broad look on life and motivates u to be a somebody. Show the world wsup by becoming someone well know, be on top of it never let **** get u down. make urself a stronger person. u already are a strong person
2007-01-17 03:29:59 · answer #3 · answered by xsammon 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
its quite kool i hope its not a true story but gurl u look like u r a strong person and stuff so if it is true walk on thru and get at the other end as a strong individual!!! tkc
2007-01-17 03:31:42 · answer #4 · answered by rhea777 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is really a frustrating flow of emotions .....i hope it was just a poem! just remember in life we are all like savages pitted against the wilderness...so whatever happens it is always survival of the fittest. dont get jam by emotions!
2007-01-17 04:06:12 · answer #5 · answered by summer_gurl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a great poem and I am sure lots of girls/women can relate to it in some way. I know I can.
Continue, it is great
2007-01-17 03:33:21 · answer #6 · answered by sand 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not "ebys" it's "abyss". Sorry, but keep your day job (not that I know anything about poetry anyway).
Er...not "your" but "you're" (the contraction for 'you are').
2007-01-17 03:36:23 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice
2007-01-17 03:25:42 · answer #8 · answered by geminimale82 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
a note i think you meant abyss not ebys
2007-01-17 03:30:38 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
its deep. but i think you are helping yourself by expressing yourself and writing poems. - i dunno if that poem is the truth, but hang in there. you'll show them who the better person is in the end.
2007-01-17 03:25:40 · answer #10 · answered by rustyolddonkey 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋