please help me?

Question

i'm a primary 5 student,and now i am having a problem in my composition,i am not good at writing compos so please anyone help.thanks now here is the title(not really.)

You were taking a walk in the botanical gardens.As you were admiring the swans in the pond, you saw a hand waving wildly in the water.
Make use of following points in the story.
- how you felt.
- what did you do
- what happened to the person in the water
- what happen to the person in the end.

please i need this very agently,so please help me.

and please don't give me some kind of ridiculars answers

Answer 1

First you might like to say that its a the weather was pleasant and u are taking a walk...Basically the intro..
Elaborate on your surroundings...
u were strolling by the pond...you were admiring the swans...suddenly u saw a hand waving wildly in the water...from this part onwards u should start to ans the questions and elaborate on them..
- how you felt.eg,u panicked upon seeing the hand..etc
- what did you doeg,u shouted for help etc...
- what happened to the person in the watered eg,the person got saved...etc
- what happen to the person in the end...eg,he was saved and was sent to the hospital...
maybe u can include ur feelings on that entire incident...


Basically,u sort of expand the senerio given to you,then answer the questions..hope this will help u in writing better compos

Answer 2

@ Happy, finally someone recognized me.
@ Wave back too and smiled.
@ That person swam back ashore.
@ He felt shamed as I am, we do not know each other.

Answer 3

You need to do your own homework. Try to read more books, this will help in writing composition.

Answer 4

call the lif guard or throw him a hevy anchor and wave bye bye