ok.. for school we have to write an essay on..??

Question

the day i met .........(blank) i decided to write about my brother in law because i've known him since i was 5 and now i am 13... i remember that day even though i was 5..

but what should be included in my essay

thanks

well when i met him he was just a friend of my sister's.. 8 years down the line they got married..

should i tell something about him(what he's like) and other things we've doe after that day??

Answer 1

All essays should have three sections. 1. The beginning where you set the stage and bring in the characters. 2. The middle where you tell the basic story of your essay. 3. The end which can be what you might expect in the future, or a conclusion or a means of leaving the subject open for a future follow-up.

If you stick to these rules, you will have no problem. The best of luck.................

Answer 2

well...
in your introduction...discuss how u met him...
in the body u can like describe him outside and inside appearance and evrything dat u did, or u admire from him..u might as well include things dat u think u don't lyk wd him...or kinda lyk dat..

on ur conclusion, w/c is most important 1, u cn say lyk for ur opinion ds is why my sister ended up marrying him...blah blah blah...

well...
i've done like very similar wd urs ages ago!

gudluck!(^_~)

Answer 3

try to express your emotions at the time and your expectations of the future. Like how nervous you were and how excited you were at a new " brother".

Answer 4

Every little detail that you can remember including your emotions.Dont make it too boring.Be expressive.

Answer 5

every detail that you can remember unless its obsurd. how it made you feel what did u do and use lots of speech marks.