are my sentenses correct?
1.Thousands of girls there to go shopping with their friends.
2.The Actor who once has the fans screaming is now a janitor.
3. The group had disbanded.
2007-01-14 19:27:34 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
1. Either "....were there to go..." OR "...girls there go shopping..." Depends on the thought to be conveyed; both are good sentences. As originally written, there was no verb in the sentence.
2. actor (no caps) and "...who once had..."
Do NOT set the clause off with commas. It is an essential clause, defining actor, and the commas are incorrect.
3. Correct as written. The suggested changes alter the meaning of the sentence.
2007-01-15 03:54:31 · answer #1 · answered by dollhaus 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No.
1. Thousands of girls over there went shopping with their friends.
2.The actor, who once had fans screaming, is now a janitor.
3. The group had been disbanded.
2007-01-14 19:44:53 · answer #2 · answered by Lin 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
No.
1. Thousands of girls were there with their friends to go shopping.
2. The actor, who once had the fans screaming, is now a janitor.
3. The group had disbanded.
2007-01-14 19:36:44 · answer #3 · answered by Mangy Coyote 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
no
1.Thousands of girls go there shopping with their friends.
2.The Actor who once had the fans screaming is now a janitor.
3. The group has disbanded.
2007-01-14 19:35:27 · answer #4 · answered by paducahshane1 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Consider the following sentence revisions.
1. Thousands of girls go shopping there.
Thousands of friends go shopping there.
Thousands of girlfriends go shopping there.
Thousands of girlfriends are shopping together.
Thousands of girls are shopping there with friends.
2. The janitor was once an actor with screaming fans.
The janitor was once a famous actor with a following of screaming fans.
3. The group disbanded.
2007-01-14 20:06:55 · answer #5 · answered by birdwatcher 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋