i need to make this sound like brochures, please help me fix it:
Johannesburg is full of things to do.
2007-01-14 16:08:11 · 9 answers · asked by madame94 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
without sounding too extreme?
2007-01-14 16:14:14 · update #1
without sounding too extreme?
2007-01-14 16:14:15 · update #2
If you are looking for excitement and want to participate in several exciting and intriguing things,Johannesburg is the perfect place to visit.
2007-01-14 16:14:26 · answer #1 · answered by punkywoman1972 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Johannesburg is full of things to do.
In lively Johannesburg, there is never a shortage of fun.
Lively Johannesberg never ceases to entertain visitors with its wide array of night clubs, monuments, museums, and many more attractions!
2007-01-14 16:14:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
There are some great answers... but they do not answer your question. If you want to expand your sentence to a paragraph, there are several excellent choices.
However, to enhance the single sentence, you might consider:
Johannesburg has an abundance of activities to enjoy.
2007-01-14 19:20:09 · answer #3 · answered by sagacity_ron 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When visiting Johannesburg, plan a to stay the day, there are so many place to see and visit.
2007-01-14 16:19:12 · answer #4 · answered by us5we2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"A place for anything and anyone. No borders, no problems. The only border is your imagination. Johannesburg is your place to go."
2007-01-14 16:18:51 · answer #5 · answered by Rossenrot 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Janannesburg is without a doubt, the ultimate tourist location!
2007-01-14 16:12:47 · answer #6 · answered by Mr Jarvis 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Johannesburg has numerous attractions and fun things to partake in.
2007-01-14 16:16:05 · answer #7 · answered by kingsmansoysauce 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Johannesburg is abundant in activities.
2007-01-14 16:27:02 · answer #8 · answered by akmackinnon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You might start by spelling your question corrrectly "how can i spice THESE sentences up" and then learn how to do the other stuff.
2007-01-14 16:18:34 · answer #9 · answered by COK11 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋