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Life and Death One Coming In One Coming Out
To my beloved twin sister Shawna Nicole. Rest in peace.

From the moment I took
My first breath of life I
Lose the only friend I know,
My identical twin.

Where am I? What is going on?
What is happening to me?
Where is my sister?
Where am I going?

People are poking at me,
What is this sticking in my hand?
I am scared out of my mind,
Why are you hurting me?

People are crying,
People are praying for me,
Why is everyone so sad?
Am I going to be alright?

2007-01-14 15:51:18 · 6 answers · asked by Jessica's advice 2 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

6 answers

It's straight from the heart ,genuine and terribly sad.

2007-01-14 18:27:35 · answer #1 · answered by ghds 4 · 0 0

It's very touching with just the right amount of emotion. I can't relate to it, but I can feel the feelings you feel when I read the poem.

2007-01-14 23:59:44 · answer #2 · answered by moxie 2 · 1 0

I love it, its a beautiful poem, although very sad and it rhymes too.

2007-01-15 00:00:06 · answer #3 · answered by Scarlet 3 · 0 0

I'll give it four stars out of five. I'd say it speaks to me.

2007-01-15 01:35:39 · answer #4 · answered by Mr. Bodhisattva 6 · 0 0

I like it sounds like true heartache.

2007-01-15 00:01:44 · answer #5 · answered by bluewing-01 1 · 0 0

love lost, such a cost

2007-01-15 00:02:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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