Is this a good letter of recommendation???

Question

January. 14th 2007


Subject: Letter of Recommendation for CFB Petawawa



To Whom It May Concern,

I have known Richard Brennan for many years. Richard has been presently working on my horse farm as a labourer. He has skills in mucking box stalls, grooming, daily chores, and repairing minor problems. Richard is a very hard worker. I also believe that Richard is very consistent and applies himself well to his assigned tasks. He has shown iniative and willingness to take on new tasks.

I would recommend Richard Brennan for an employee at your company. He is a smart person and loves to meet new people. Richard is well motivated and very organized.



How should I end the rest.

Answer 1

Somewhere in your text - preferably at the beginning - you'll need to include the number of years Richard has been in your employ.

You can end with something like " ..... Richard has been a dedicated (conscientious, hardworking, [whatever adjective that honestly describes his job performance]) employee. I wish him the very best in his future endeavors."

PS - Do you really mean to say "Has been presently"? Would recommend "has been" OR "is presently".

Answer 2

You need help organizing the letter. First state all the general qualities that he has: being a hard worker, consistent etc. in the first paragraph. Then use each following paragraph to illustrate each individual point by using specific examples.

That's it---the letter needs more organizing and focus. Otherwise, what you said about Richard is very nice.

Answer 3

I would change this around to Richard is dedicated and responsible worker. He has shown devoting to going over and above what is required of him at all times. Additionally, he is a rapid learner and orients himself well to new tasks.

I believe Richard would make a wonderful addition to your company.

Answer 4

are you the one writing this letter?

what type of job is Richard applying for?
ideally, you should try to make your recommendation letter specific to the type of job he is applying for. if there are any particular skills or knowledge that this job would require, that is what you should emphasize.

above all, tell the truth. don't exaggerate or feel the need to make anything up. just tell it like it is. employers appreciate honesty.

good luck.

Answer 5

I believe Richard would be an asset to your company and that you would be both satisfied and pleased with his work ethic.
Sincerely, Jane Doe.

Answer 6

If you are looking for a person with all of these attributes, Richard is the right person.

Answer 7

This sound good, but I am wondering why there are so many details about what he did on the farm. I assume you are writing this for this person. You my sign of as Respectfully Yours, or any other way you may wish.