I've got two poems here, please let me know which you like better.
(It's for my b/f for valentine's day)
#1 “If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.”
#2 “I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes so warm and true,
I love the way you kiss me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.
I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
And the way you're always there.
I love the way you touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And glad that you are mine.”
2007-01-14 10:58:07 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
There both good, give him one in the morning and the other in the evening.
2007-01-14 11:03:13 · answer #1 · answered by APACHE 7 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow they are Beautiful do you write for a living if not you should maybe give him both be creative and get a scrapbook program for PC and print out a page and either type Or write them in (if ya type them can always cut & paste them in)( scrapbook programs are cheap i bought one for $10 this christmas and they have holidays pages ie hearts ect for V Day would be great and a lot of fun
2007-01-14 19:06:28 · answer #2 · answered by Leveler 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the first one is too serious like you are getting married or something. i like the second one because its flirty and you get your point across without using too many word. Both r good though. You should write professional love poetry. lol.
2007-01-14 19:03:34 · answer #3 · answered by Lovely 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
guys dont want poems for gifts. think of a materialistic gift.
sorry not wanting to be harsh...its true.
2007-01-14 19:01:55 · answer #4 · answered by sweetheart--xo 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
like the first one better.
2007-01-14 19:02:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
They BOTH make me nauseous!
2007-01-14 19:02:26 · answer #6 · answered by Lorenz 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
haha..........I saw these on the internet, but I like the 1st one!
2007-01-14 19:01:49 · answer #7 · answered by Allgeier 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋