is this poem good and how should the ending be
Fear
What is fear?
Is it feeling of anxiety?
Is it the feeling of guilt?
Is it a phobia
2007-01-14 06:35:41 · 6 answers · asked by hockey pro 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Not the most exciting or insightful poem I've ever read, but a start.
Poems are fun for getting down our thoughts, so if that is your goal, it's alright to put down anything inside you!
How about ending with something like:
"I must search my thoughts
Until I know for sure!"
2007-01-14 08:12:36 · answer #1 · answered by ♥Sweetmusic ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If insist that you are a Martian, people will think you're a little touched. But if you scribble down a few questions and call it a poem, many people will believe it is a poem.
Sorry, something isn't a poem just because you call it that. Poems use such devices such as euphony, modulation, resonance, assonance, consonance, rhyme, meter and many more things. If you are serious about writing poetry, I suggest that you study the subject.
2007-01-14 20:11:13 · answer #2 · answered by Husker41 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very short. Its honestly not the best thing I've ever seen though. How old are you though? How good that is depends on how old you are. If you are 12 or under, then it is pretty good. Only you can decide how the ending will go.
2007-01-14 14:44:47 · answer #3 · answered by chanteuse87 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry dude, but that's not a poem. It's just a series of questions.
2007-01-14 14:41:39 · answer #4 · answered by Raul D 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good i would end it by saying is fear being afried of fear ook that was bad but at least i tryed to help
2007-01-14 14:41:23 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wordsworth has nothing to worry about
2007-01-14 14:53:58 · answer #6 · answered by tenchian56 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋