What do you think?

Question

I don't care whether or not you like this kinda thing....that's not my question....as far as sappy poems/love songs go....whether you like it or not...how does this one fare? If you like this kind of thing, do you like it? It's called "Make Me Blieve" and I wrote it last weak at work when I was really bored....And believe me....I've done much much better in times past, even been published........go to my 360 page to see it....

And give me your thoughts on why you didn't like it....be honest but make sense....and no answers that are " I just don't like it" types.....I need more then that

Answer 1

You came up a little short.