I wrote this poem quite awhile ago, I just read over it and am interested in what people think of it. Thanks!
Trapped within the devil's flames
I felt I couldn't leave
I could feel the fire getting hot
But I did not want to believe
The heat was rising
And the smoke got thick
Too scared to leave
It was some sort of trick
I saw the sign...EXIT
Big and Bold
But I did not want it
Or so I was told
In the end, I had no choice
I had to leave the flames
I was just too tired
Of playing the devil's games
Jesus was the EXIT
God's only son
He came to fight the fires
For everyone
He stood at the EXIT
I finally let Him in
Thanks to Him, my Savior
I won't fight the flames again
2007-01-13
18:02:24
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