K i have another poem?

Question

I look away from you
with tears in my eyes
I can feel my heart break
and i know you will never realize

that i love you so much
my world is based on you
and if you leave me
i don't know what i will do

you say that you met someone else
that you couldn't do that to me
that you don't want to cause me pain
but why can't you see

that leaving me was breaking me
that my life was about to fall apart
and not only were you leaving me
but you were taking with my heart

But me, i simply nodded
and let you walk away
I kept you in a cornor
to save for another day

I couldn't keep you here
and i wouldn't you knew
so good bye for now
you can go with the morning dew

And if we meet
in a month or in years
you'll see that i've lost nothing
except for a million tears

what do you think... if you like this one check out my she cuts on too

Answer 1

my skin is falling off.

Answer 2

cool

Answer 3

its very intense and very well written
good job =)