i know your there but why do i care your just a big scare
and your not even there
2007-01-13 12:04:14 · 5 answers · asked by MysteryChica 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Celebrities
That's pretty good, nice rhyming....Keep writing! Make it longer and it'd be really good!
2007-01-13 12:21:54 · answer #1 · answered by Emily 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's nice, if it was a little longer perhaps it would be nice. I can't restrain myself from asking, but how old are you exactly? I don't mean to be unpleasant, as I'm not, but you seem a little on the youngish side and all I was intending to do was cautioning you from Internet predators. They might seek information from you and later abduct or murder you. So be careful out there and continue writing poems! There are also sexual predators, just to let you know. I don't want to frighten you, but it's reality, and you have to face it and make sure that your parents know when you IM or e-mail someone you've never met. Let them make decisions like that because it truly will come in handy later on. Sorry for the long lecture, though!
2007-01-13 20:11:05 · answer #2 · answered by sPrInG LiLY 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its got a good vibe try rhyming other words with it and it may turn out great.
2007-01-13 20:08:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
really good
2007-01-13 20:32:01 · answer #4 · answered by Zack 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it!!! its pretty good.
2007-01-13 20:09:49 · answer #5 · answered by Afsoun M 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋