Is this poem nay good, it took me like 5 minutes so i dont know if it is or not?

Question

Division Of Heart

My world, a turmoil of thoughts and emotion,
Your world, an endless stream of stress and commotion,
My world, a bellowing feeling of hate and regret,
Your world, wondering if you'll ever forget,
My world, hoping for a chance at reconstruction,
Your world, so damn tired of this destruction,
My world, sick as a dog, gettin fat as a hog,
Your world, eyes heavy, no sleep, never ready,
My world, hoping shes growing, and maturing,
Your world, pain of the growing never slowing,
Our world, oppritunities closing,
Our world still exists but never showing,
Our world, an amazing abyss of tireless happiness,
Only waiting to be unlocked once again.

Answer 1

this poem was nice, sad, a real thinker, truth keep writing poems. if you can right that in five min's. imagine what you can right in a life time :)

Answer 2

Wow! This only took you 5 MINUTES?! That's a good poem! If you have any more, you should ( if you want to ) put more up on yahoo answers so that others could read and comment! ^.^ Keep up the good work! ^.^

Answer 3

Its really good although I wish you would omit the My world, your world, our world stuff. It takes away from the flow of the poem.

Answer 4

I really like this poem. I say that it is good.

Answer 5

your poems really good you have real talent

Answer 6

i like it, really good

Answer 7

its really good.... but are you emo? cuz it sounds like it.